Onyx Drops Of Madness

Very lovely...

thank you kindly lovely lady :)

with love Crim

a water fall
of images...

thank you Paul pleased to have provided such images :)

with love Crim

I understand these feelings so well.  You express them beautifully.

I see you as this.....
"'paint myself pretty
with their lovely diverse hues
no longer a death moth
 
now a multi colored butterfly
showing all the beauty
of a crystal reflecting a whole soul ""

A gorgeous though fragile thingl, reflected light of many talents and many depths of your gold soul.

💖J

thank you lovely Jennifer for understanding and seeing me in this light you touch my heart :)

with love Brenda

💜💜💜💜 this! Beautifully written!!
💕Sissy

thank you most kindly Sissy :)

with love Crim

Hi Brenda: Lovely...from onyx madness to a rainbow butterfly.  

thank you graciously Shauna :)

with love Brenda

beautiful one I love that I'm invited to bathe in the aquatics with you.. while your lithe form lovingly swims about me.. so entranced by this vision of us :)

I love you smiling widely this morning :)

love Brenda

rapsody in the rain. every rainstorm brings a poem. wonderful, Crim...

thank you John for such a poetic comment  :)

with love Crim

From darkness to light...yup my kinda poem! :)

thank you Poe I love your visits :)

with love Crim

Resplendent beauty! Your salacious words cascade into the depths of gentle greatness! Outstanding poetry. A winner! - blue angel

thank you lovely Angel for making me smile wide this morning :)

with love Crim

"today I long to strip bare
dance under cascading waters
rainbow in color"
~the abandon to a color dazzle of arching waters is serene & lovely..

"paint myself pretty <~~ faves and happy to see intent, m'purdies..
with their lovely diverse hues
no longer a death moth"
&
"now a multi colored butterfly
showing all the beauty
of a crystal reflecting a whole soul" <~~'whole' ..brings me smiles Brenda ;)
~the emergence to butterfly life colors from moth's darker side shows true courage. I am guilty
of harboring vast fondles for the dark moth as well. You remind me of a clear crystalline reflection,
refreshed in healing rains here..

Adore your mind, as it swells and pours from your page.. great comp works CrimCrim.
Title evokes a perfect edge to the [yearned for]shedding of madness.
much loves & respects for your vibrant pen today. *mwahs
~d

lovely d~ thank you for showing me so much love on this write..

I do have a very dark side and I sometimes shy away from it though Taryn has been encouraging me to embrace this side as well as my light side..

so pleased you found beauty in my rainbow butterfly ending..

love Brenda

"melancholy rain drops
pour down on a lonely heart
sheltering in their ferocious pull"
 
The forecast calls for pain, and you catch the depression well in the pull of the rain drops.  Things seem grim but it's a thrill to see that multi-color butterfly emerge!  Fine work Crim!

thank you Sir Crow you see me so well :)

with love Crim

you never fail to impress - this is yet another beautiful piece that showcases your talent with words and description - it's great when the reader can SEE the poem, you are so good at this :-)

:-)

thank you David smiling widely at you for making my day with your beautiful comment :)

with love Crim

A conversion from Blackness (the absence of color) to a spirit of just the opposite.
A clever and hopeful transformation eloquently scribed.
I enjoyed the piece, Crim....Nice Job!

thank you most kindly Sandman :)

with love Crim