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Cherry Colored LIPs
Cherry colored Lips
Upon my mouth,
pressing in hard
to force point,
ash the taste
of deep hate
a hint of
soul lingers
upon cherry colored
LIPs
Upon my mouth,
pressing in hard
to force point,
ash the taste
of deep hate
a hint of
soul lingers
upon cherry colored
LIPs
Published 10th Sep 2015
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10th Sep 2015 5:40pm
deep write Sir stirring emotions in me this morning..
excellent write with love and respect Crim
excellent write with love and respect Crim
10th Sep 2015 7:31pm
From cherried lust to ash and hate.. *praises SirDevils of P..
"pressing in hard
to force point, "
~can totally feel the double entendre'd verse. hard, deep gut punch this is..
dark sighs to F-ed reality but love your word choices here!
laters n be well m'friend,
~d
"pressing in hard
to force point, "
~can totally feel the double entendre'd verse. hard, deep gut punch this is..
dark sighs to F-ed reality but love your word choices here!
laters n be well m'friend,
~d
10th Sep 2015 9:22pm
Anonymous
12th Sep 2015 4:03am
Nice and concise with excellent delivery DP.
18th Sep 2015 4:29am
...as if 'bittersweet'. Such soft yet potent ink DP!
Really great crossing paths, looking forward to the poetic connection.....
Really great crossing paths, looking forward to the poetic connection.....
Anonymous
15th Sep 2016 4:17am
Truly love this piece.
Expression is so very potent. 💓
Expression is so very potent. 💓
Anonymous
29th Aug 2017 3:55pm
Powerful experience
* pressing in hard
to force point* another fabulous line
* pressing in hard
to force point* another fabulous line
