Dominant Presence And The Little Girl In Me

thank you Gabriel :)

with love Crim

It felt as if this could have been written in the corner of his displeasure, the place for you to think. The punished left in kneeling to reflect.

Beyond that this write carves at me, sinister growl escapes from the corners of my carnal grin. I always enjoy your work when you linger upon the edge.

thank you Soul for a great comment..

yes I did displease him now I wait in submission..

with love Crim

it's a revealing look at subservience, the pleasure that is so real to a sub. spoken in a little girl voice, Crim...

thank you John for visiting my pages he makes me tremble like a little girl..

with love Crim

WOW!
I so get this.. it takes a strong Natural Dom to enslave a submissive into Subservience and sexual slavery
which is so erotic!  Nice poem Sis!!!
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Love
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxox

thank you beautiful for such fantastic comment making me smile wide :)

with love Crim

Wow love it!!!

thank you most graciously :)

with love Crim

thank you beautiful one for understanding me..

I hope so too lovely one

I love you :) Brenda

A rare sense to behold! I haven't felt a Dominate presence that could bear such weight in a very long time. The movements beyond the shadows hold much mystery. The little girl inside is one I protect, no matter how deviant she is. Break the woman, and nothing more. He'll receive your subservience with cold eyes, and hot hands. Much enjoyed this view into your willingness. Respectfully, blue angel

thank you lovely Angel he is something to behold his presence so Dominant..

with love Crim

You lil slutty submissive you!!
Mmmmmm So freakin Hott! lol...

thank you Poe love your visits and thoughts :)

with love Crim

Love your wording in this piece very hot and sexual. Hope you find what your looking for.

Thanks for sharing

thank you for a sexy comment :)

found him ;)

with love Crim

"I'm a grown woman though you bring out the little girl in me  
the deviant one that longs to be bent over your knee  
and spanked for my bad behavior"

You might be a deviant but you're also a lot of fun.  If you need a spanking then so be it, particularly if it inspires such fine work.  Really enjoyed this you bad girl!    

thank you Sir Crow I love to be naughty ;)

with love Crim

Beautiful write, Brenda.. happy for you!! with love..


Dave

thank you kindly Dave :)

with love Crim

you are so good at this, such a skilled wordsmith - It's not just that - I normally would not read or appreciate poetry on this subject matter, mainly because I don't understand it - Yet I feel compelled to read your work as it always stirs something in me, even if I am not always sure what - that takes so much skill

loved this one :-)

thank you David I'm pleased to have stirred emotions in you :)

with love Crim

oh beautiful brenda, this is an exquisite balance of sensuality & vulnerability... reminding me a little of bob dylan's "just like a woman" in places
loved this more than words can properly express
xoxox

thank you most graciously beautiful Katja you made my evening with your comments..

loved the song reference it's perfect :)

with love Brenda

powerful piece ...

thank you Sir..

with love and respect Crimsin

so many roles - so many opportunities - such vivid verses