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Amongst Shifted Pressure
OLD MEN AND WOMEN CARRYING CROSSES
(ON BROKEN SPINES)
CHILDREN WATCHING THEIR PARENTS
(CRYING NOT TO WATCH)
TELL YOUR MEN, "WHAT YOU SEE IS WHAT YOU DESERVE"
NO ONE IS ABOVE YOU.
IM NEVER CLEAN AMONGST MY PEERS,
AMONGST SHIFTED PRESSURE.
IM ALWAYS FINDING MYSELF-FLOATING IN ETERNITY
A MINDSET, DISTANT FROM REALITY.
YOUNG MEN AND WOMEN RUNNING AWAY
(FORGE A PLAN)
SET THOSE FOR SELF-DESTRUCTION(FREE THEIR WILL TO FIGHT)
AMONGST SHIFTED PRESSURE.
TELL THE OPPOSITION, "CHOOSE NOW OR FOREVER DIE BY THE DEVILS HANDS OF YOUR ANCESTORS."
NO ONE IS ABOVE YOU.
IM NEVER CLEAN AMONGST MY PEERS,
AMONGST SHIFTED PRESSURE.
IM ALWAYS FINDING MYSELF-FLOATING IN ETERNITY
A MINDSET, DISTANT FROM REALITY.
WHEN MY FRIENDS CRY
(A PERSON WITHIN SHIFTS OUT)
KNOWING YOU CANT LIVE OUT YOUR DREAMS
(MENTAL ILLNESS IS AN ISSUE)
TRAUMATIZED FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES
TELL YOUR MEN, "WHAT YOU SEE IS WHAT YOU DESERVE"
WE ALL KNOW YOU SO WELL.
YOU BLAMED US FOR BEING ABOVE YOU
(NEVER UNDEFEATED)
THROW AWAY YOUR MORALS, PRINCIPLES AND TRUE QUALITIES.
YOU SHALL LOSE ALL YOUR FRIENDS AND FAMILY.
AND ULTIMATELY, LOSE YOUR MEANING INSIDE OF YOURSELF.
NO ONE IS ABOVE YOU.
IM NEVER CLEAN AMONGST MY PEERS,
AMONGST SHIFTED PRESSURE.
IM ALWAYS FINDING MYSELF-FLOATING IN ETERNITY
A MINDSET, DISTANT FROM REALITY.
Words of our parents mean shit too us.
The ones who come after us will triumph.
They will make friends, friends who become enemies and forge bonds with someone special.
It took us over 10 lifetimes to end both sides.
Published 7th Sep 2015
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11th Sep 2015 6:30am
Great read as always Jasper. I enjoy your work whenever I can. Keep it up!
14th Sep 2015 3:31pm
15th Sep 2015 1:30am
SHifted Pressure" great line its brutal been a shape shifter all the time, thank you for writing good work.
17th Sep 2015 6:17am
Thank you.
I was going for a brutal kind of a deathcore mood on this song.
It kinda has a feel of a song by a band called "The Acacia Strain."
I was going for a brutal kind of a deathcore mood on this song.
It kinda has a feel of a song by a band called "The Acacia Strain."
20th Aug 2017 1:57am
I loved it, the word FORGE says so much like expresses the corruption our soul receives when it gets invaded , and the way shifted pressure puts so much pressure on having a shower, getting clean, IM NEVER CLEAN AROUND MY PEERS, it is so true, I have to tell my friends "I'm Going to have a shower before I come over" and they say "Yeah I'll do that too" and I said once in a century, the rest of the time it is unknown, but I used to have a shower at night, wear my suit for work, sleep in it, wake up and go to work. lol Thank you, if you want, have a browse at my stuff, I'd appreciate your criticism and I'll keep following. Nice to meet you.
