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Morning
Swallowed down deep,
awakened from sleep.
Your mouth hungrily
and masterfully takes me.
Lips wrapped tightly
around girth.
Working it like your
calling from birth.
Mouth slowly passing
over each throbbing inch.
Back of my thighs you clinch,
teeth raking, I flinch.
You come up for air
Look deeply,...stare.
Lips back to tip,
tongue swirls and licks.
Fingers wrapped round base
You seemly loving the taste.
Going down again
from tip to base,
My hands full hair
fucking that lovely face.
Throat relaxed taking me,
pulling me, sucking me.
Driving me... Crazy.
The sounds of mouth
to cock, breathing labored
throat blocked.
Up again... You stare
quickly going back
down there.
Taking the time to please
my throbbing head.
Hot lips all around,
licking and sucking
my swollen crown.
Hand strokes, and deep throat.
Your hot mouth and your lips coat ...
My cock with such delight
Sucking lips wrapped tight
pulling further out of sight.
I am so far gone...
I moan and groan.
pleasure spills..
you look up...
Thrilled
awakened from sleep.
Your mouth hungrily
and masterfully takes me.
Lips wrapped tightly
around girth.
Working it like your
calling from birth.
Mouth slowly passing
over each throbbing inch.
Back of my thighs you clinch,
teeth raking, I flinch.
You come up for air
Look deeply,...stare.
Lips back to tip,
tongue swirls and licks.
Fingers wrapped round base
You seemly loving the taste.
Going down again
from tip to base,
My hands full hair
fucking that lovely face.
Throat relaxed taking me,
pulling me, sucking me.
Driving me... Crazy.
The sounds of mouth
to cock, breathing labored
throat blocked.
Up again... You stare
quickly going back
down there.
Taking the time to please
my throbbing head.
Hot lips all around,
licking and sucking
my swollen crown.
Hand strokes, and deep throat.
Your hot mouth and your lips coat ...
My cock with such delight
Sucking lips wrapped tight
pulling further out of sight.
I am so far gone...
I moan and groan.
pleasure spills..
you look up...
Thrilled
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Re. Morning
Anonymous
7th Sep 2015 1:33am
Wow! Damn, I felt that blowjob from the word go. That silky mouth, educated lips and tongue. yes indeed, your words were intensely on a roll around that cock she was sucking.
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Re: Re. Morning
7th Sep 2015 3:56am
Thanks for the comments Jerry. You
know there is nothing like a girl who
loves to blow and not through the
motions goes. Well I know you know
what I mean.
Keith
know there is nothing like a girl who
loves to blow and not through the
motions goes. Well I know you know
what I mean.
Keith
Re. Morning
7th Sep 2015 7:15am
Re: Re. Morning
Well I am so glad to hear from you
Ms looloolookie . Thanks for the read
and leaving the comment.
Keith
Re. Morning
Anonymous
7th Sep 2015 10:00am
This has to be the best first-person BJ poem I have read. What else can I say?
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Re: Re. Morning
7th Sep 2015 6:57pm
Derrick thanks for your kind
comment. I hope you enjoyed
it as much as I did.
Keith
comment. I hope you enjoyed
it as much as I did.
Keith
Re. Morning
7th Sep 2015 12:25pm
She can probably give lessons on how to give great BJs...Great write! I'm sure all the guys could picture themselves in your position with your descriptive words..💕Sissy
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Re: Re. Morning
7th Sep 2015 7:04pm
Glad to hear from you Miss Sissy.
A little embarrassed that you read this.
A little bit nasty huh.
Thanks for
Stopping
And commenting
Keith
A little embarrassed that you read this.
A little bit nasty huh.
Thanks for
Stopping
And commenting
Keith
Re. Morning
7th Sep 2015 8:56pm
Yeah, I'd call that a pretty good morning. :) ...and then some. I'd have to call in sick on a day like that. Excellent write, Keith.
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. Morning
8th Sep 2015 00:03am
Glad to hear from you Michael.
Knew the guys out there would
appreciate a morning pick me
up. Thanks for stopping by.
Keith
Knew the guys out there would
appreciate a morning pick me
up. Thanks for stopping by.
Keith
Re. Morning
7th Sep 2015 10:33pm
"Throat relaxed taking me,
pulling me, sucking me.
Driving me... Crazy."
&
"I am so far gone...
I moan and groan.
pleasure spills..
you look up...
Thrilled"
~the intimacy of a shared pleasure here practically drips from your page Keith.. !!!
gotta luvz the wake up calls.. ty fer warming my coffee with your hot pen! smoothly written & enjoyed..
be well sweetie
~d
pulling me, sucking me.
Driving me... Crazy."
&
"I am so far gone...
I moan and groan.
pleasure spills..
you look up...
Thrilled"
~the intimacy of a shared pleasure here practically drips from your page Keith.. !!!
gotta luvz the wake up calls.. ty fer warming my coffee with your hot pen! smoothly written & enjoyed..
be well sweetie
~d
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Re: Re. Morning
8th Sep 2015 00:07am
Thank you Sweet Lady for stopping
by and giving me a read. Hard to really
reply to a lady about such a subject.
Thanks as always, for gracing my
page with your presence.
Keith
by and giving me a read. Hard to really
reply to a lady about such a subject.
Thanks as always, for gracing my
page with your presence.
Keith
Re: Re. Morning
8th Sep 2015 00:20am
Re. Morning
26th Sep 2015 11:58pm
Very sexy and erotic reminds me of one of my earlier erotic poems that I wrote.
Sexy write, loved it :)
Sexy write, loved it :)
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Re: Re. Morning
27th Sep 2015 1:31am
Thank you Ms. Jackson, must have done a decent job if it reminds you of one of your own. I really appreciate
you giving me a read.
Keith
you giving me a read.
Keith