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My Erotic Zone
E
N
T
E
m EROTIC
y ZONE
Gon' get purrrfucked
Get down
Get down
To taste learn worship
Thigh s
Betweeeen theese
Thigh s
Nature nurture
Got moves
Got moves
Turn big men boys
Make
Me.......uh
Turn toungue to toy
Please
L
EyOes
O
K
Go down
Go down
You bout to get owned
Jens
Pleasure
Center.............zoned 🎯
Published 31st Aug 2015
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31st Aug 2015 3:43am
mmm sexy inking with a sassy attitude which I love..
get down with your hot self beautiful Jennifer ;)
with love Brenda
get down with your hot self beautiful Jennifer ;)
with love Brenda
31st Aug 2015 3:50am
Think i might have to let the fingers walk the talk lol
Thanks you sexy thang you!
🐤🔥🐝J
Thanks you sexy thang you!
🐤🔥🐝J
31st Aug 2015 8:06am
To be sensually charged and take sex to the brink
Can be oh so rewarding even if some consider it a kink
Unlocking all of those cravings that society hides deep
We learn more about ourselves when we finally take a leap
Can be oh so rewarding even if some consider it a kink
Unlocking all of those cravings that society hides deep
We learn more about ourselves when we finally take a leap
31st Aug 2015 8:12am
Yes dear sir, i quite agree
Whether me on him, or her on me
I enjoy taking leaps with all sorts of lovers
Do filthy things hid undercovers
And if society balks at it
I pull up my skirt and say "suck my clit!"
Whether me on him, or her on me
I enjoy taking leaps with all sorts of lovers
Do filthy things hid undercovers
And if society balks at it
I pull up my skirt and say "suck my clit!"
31st Aug 2015 12:22pm
lawdi lawd miss jen g'on with your bad self ;) i'm smirking into my coffee here; how hawt this is beautiful lady
also, i dig the structure ^.^ really works with your teasing whimsy
xoxox
also, i dig the structure ^.^ really works with your teasing whimsy
xoxox
31st Aug 2015 1:12pm
Cool, thanks! I hope all the word arrangements read. Between two thighs and look into eyes. Thanks for the read!
31st Aug 2015 7:14pm
This has your typically fine wordplay Jennifer, and this doesn't just have structure but full blown architecture! And, yes, you do have a sense of humor. You're always fun to read in your lack of pretentiousness. I'm trying to make out what goes on in that picture. Is that you and a friend blowing bubbles? Or those could be small lights. Or maybe I need new glasses. Really enjoyed this!
31st Aug 2015 11:01pm
Lol that pic. Christmas tree lights and a very very good friend. 🍒 its all supposed to be a bit of a mystery, with clues. Fun piece to do! Thanks so much for your words, i dug it, was worried it might not read like it did in my mind. You telling me it has not only stucture, but architecture. Makes me smile and contented.
Good Crow, dig you.
🌹J
Good Crow, dig you.
🌹J
31st Aug 2015 11:30pm
The form and flow is indicative of the choppy eratic nature of your brain on heated aniticpation. :)
31st Aug 2015 11:36pm
Righht on! Thanks doll for being a consistent presense, loving reading you!
🌟🌛J
🌟🌛J
31st Aug 2015 11:54pm
1st Sep 2015 00:22am
1st Sep 2015 00:29am
To taste learn worship
Thigh s
Betweeeen theese
Thigh s
Nature nurture
I love these few lines the best. There's nothing better then a woman that knows what she wants
Love the poem keep up the heat
1st Sep 2015 1:37am
Thanks sweet! You are doing some mighty fine work yo bad self!
💥If anyone here hasnt read Devils poet, we have a fine talented new member her deep under! Read his latest ESCAPE....junkie dreams also, very good.
You have talented people reading and enjoying you already i noticed, Crow, Poeticmind, and my darlin sugarbitch Crimpson, to name a few.
Congrats!
🍒J
💥If anyone here hasnt read Devils poet, we have a fine talented new member her deep under! Read his latest ESCAPE....junkie dreams also, very good.
You have talented people reading and enjoying you already i noticed, Crow, Poeticmind, and my darlin sugarbitch Crimpson, to name a few.
Congrats!
🍒J
1st Sep 2015 2:00am
very inventive there Jen...enjoyed the read...the erotic zone zoned all day parking if you can handle it... :)
1st Sep 2015 2:21am
1st Sep 2015 2:19am
Dig the structure, very creative. It flows better than you think. Much like the subject matter, you cling and grab and grip the edges of this sexy write
1st Sep 2015 2:24am
1st Sep 2015 3:39am
I'm sure you had as much fun writing this one as I did reading...more so even I am sure. Thank you for a much needed smile tonight, Jen. :)
Michael
Michael
1st Sep 2015 3:52am
Awe thats awesome! Happy to give it. Enjoy and grin through the rest of your evening!
🌜J🌛
🌜J🌛
1st Sep 2015 4:56am
You gotts sexy-hawt anagrams, snugglebunny!
"You bout to get owned"...luvluv your playfuls Jen.. this one is my fav ;)
"To taste learn worship".. *me-fukin-yow [likes it/lol]
You have writ squishies in *all directions & I'm left wif nuthin but.."yes-please's" !!
luvzu //sweetest dreams,
~d
"You bout to get owned"...luvluv your playfuls Jen.. this one is my fav ;)
"To taste learn worship".. *me-fukin-yow [likes it/lol]
You have writ squishies in *all directions & I'm left wif nuthin but.."yes-please's" !!
luvzu //sweetest dreams,
~d
1st Sep 2015 5:05am
Thanks darksighs tickled in the pink by your praises.
Luv u 💌 nighty nites n bites teehee!
💋J
Luv u 💌 nighty nites n bites teehee!
💋J
1st Sep 2015 8:25am
very very nice;) "turn big men boys" turn tongue to toy" definitely a fun little ride this piece was...Images still flashing..Vividly aroused ;)
1st Sep 2015 8:44am
My my. Jasper speaks! Lol teasing. Nice to see you hear👂been enjoying your work! Thanks for enjoying mine.
🚬💋J
🚬💋J
Jen besides the cool structure and rhyme. I can't really explain how
But I felt I was at some hot kinky
Club with music blaring and lights
flashing. I for one reason it another kind of felt like moving as I read it. Just to let you know there
was no drug or alcohol use going
on while making the comment. Sexy&Fun
stuff you write
Keith
1st Sep 2015 9:09am
Thanks Keith! Lol no drugs or alchohol used. Had a giggle at that. Very cool reaction. Happy you said it. Felt it.
🚬💋J
🚬💋J
1st Sep 2015 2:57pm
1st Sep 2015 3:02pm
1st Sep 2015 8:46pm
Lol thanks for your honesty. You dont have to like it. Thats fine. I was honest with you when i didnt like what you left on one of mine. But i wouldnt speak for them. They are fellow talented writers, think they would frown on your disrespect for their opinion. Trust, i know buttering for my cunt when i see it.
Your Sonny piece, liked it very much. And your last leave on my piece had me rolling.
Thanks for your time, Again.
💋J
Your Sonny piece, liked it very much. And your last leave on my piece had me rolling.
Thanks for your time, Again.
💋J
3rd Sep 2015 00:35am
I think I got assaulted by vagina and I loved it. Nice pic too, thats hot!
4th Sep 2015 9:52am
Anonymous
10th Sep 2015 00:05am
I love it when someone goes the limit in anything, especially if it is sexual, and my friend, you ALWAYS go the limit and then some. It is the and then some that keeps me cuming back for more of your lust-crazed appetite. Chow down with whatever is on the menu, and you do it so fucking well!
10th Sep 2015 00:23am
10th Sep 2015 9:31pm
Fun! :) This was very simple and yet I totally felt a primal and sensual rhythm with it.
I like the playful way you arranged the words. I think this would look really cool as a graphic.
Thanks for participating!
I like the playful way you arranged the words. I think this would look really cool as a graphic.
Thanks for participating!
10th Sep 2015 9:34pm
