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I Conjure
the night is heavy
smothering me
with it's intensity
pressing down
on my soft spots
so I rise above the stars
into outer space
where there is no light
to oppress
it's cool here
onyx arms embrace
the darkness my home
here I conjure
amongst the blackness
of the void
it receives my offering
sending out my waves
across the Earth
caressing those I care for
biting, gnawing and tearing
at those I don't
feeling freer by the moment
I breathe deep
exhale and burn out the weak stars
that would shine their meager light
casting looks of derision
on a beauty they don't understand
so I cast on this eve
let all eyes be opened
as it is above, so it is below
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27th Aug 2015 6:59am
thank you beautiful Taryn for your insightful and lovely comment..
yes what a world it would be without false judgment :)
with love Brenda
yes what a world it would be without false judgment :)
with love Brenda
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27th Aug 2015 7:14am
a sought peace..embraced out of the nights, in the heights of cosmic space...
magical, dark, depths, sacred, luminous, btfl, peace...all at once u create Crim.
esp. loved these
"that would shine their meager light
casting looks of derision
on a beauty they don't understand "
tq n write on , <3 x:)
magical, dark, depths, sacred, luminous, btfl, peace...all at once u create Crim.
esp. loved these
"that would shine their meager light
casting looks of derision
on a beauty they don't understand "
tq n write on , <3 x:)
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27th Aug 2015 8:59pm
thank you Uma for the lovely comments and insight to my write :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
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Anonymous
27th Aug 2015 7:25am
"as it is above, so it is below"
Miss Crim. . .what a stellar ending. . .My hat's off to you!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
Miss Crim. . .what a stellar ending. . .My hat's off to you!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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27th Aug 2015 9:04pm
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Anonymous
27th Aug 2015 7:51am
oh wow Brenda, so concise and brilliant. Bringing back to circle with the closing lines. Beautiful!!
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27th Aug 2015 9:05pm
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27th Aug 2015 7:59am
This a Spectacular scribe Brenda, filled
with Energy and ability to Spell Cast what
You have Desired.
I Hope that You don't mind how I para-phrased
Your closing line which was Invigorating to read.
I read it several times over because of the Energy
that was felt during its Recitation.
"so I cast on this eve
let all eyes be opened (filled with the
as it is above, so it is knowledge
below," to see)
*"as I Mote it to be in the Dominion
of My mynd, so Mote it to be
on the Earth; or, wherever
or upon Whomever I CHOOSE."
"The Power of Subconscious Mind"
by Dr. Joseph Murphy is a good
book to read on this concept.
"I breathe deep
exhale and burn out the weak stars
that would shine their meager light
casting looks of derision
on a beauty they don't understand,"
Exceptional: I can Imagine You in Your
Pure aura exhaling this Will upon those
who don't understand.
Dantalian...
with Energy and ability to Spell Cast what
You have Desired.
I Hope that You don't mind how I para-phrased
Your closing line which was Invigorating to read.
I read it several times over because of the Energy
that was felt during its Recitation.
"so I cast on this eve
let all eyes be opened (filled with the
as it is above, so it is knowledge
below," to see)
*"as I Mote it to be in the Dominion
of My mynd, so Mote it to be
on the Earth; or, wherever
or upon Whomever I CHOOSE."
"The Power of Subconscious Mind"
by Dr. Joseph Murphy is a good
book to read on this concept.
"I breathe deep
exhale and burn out the weak stars
that would shine their meager light
casting looks of derision
on a beauty they don't understand,"
Exceptional: I can Imagine You in Your
Pure aura exhaling this Will upon those
who don't understand.
Dantalian...
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27th Aug 2015 9:11pm
Dearest Dantalian thank you so much your understanding and wealth of knowledge blow me away..
I loved what you added almost as if you were spell casting with me..
thank you for the book recommendation it's appreciated as I'm not book smart on this topic just have a natural ability as you yourself do when it comes to energy and practicing the art..
I graciously thank you for the love you've shown this ink and the power you added to it..
Blessed Be Brenda
I loved what you added almost as if you were spell casting with me..
thank you for the book recommendation it's appreciated as I'm not book smart on this topic just have a natural ability as you yourself do when it comes to energy and practicing the art..
I graciously thank you for the love you've shown this ink and the power you added to it..
Blessed Be Brenda
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27th Aug 2015 10:45am
And really, isn't that what spells do? To cast is to rush head long into that logical end where in some distant, future point there will come a time, and we can see from here how this is going to end.....it's not about fairness, but rather about understanding, and thus there is no reward.
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Re: Re. I Conjure
27th Aug 2015 9:16pm
thank you for your take on my write RT..
the reward was already derived however in the writing of this..
with love Crim
the reward was already derived however in the writing of this..
with love Crim
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Anonymous
27th Aug 2015 1:03pm
Brenda, this is a beautiful ink.. So deep, and spiritual.. A write of hope, and connecting with other souls.. Without biased thinking.. Into the list it goes.. With love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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27th Aug 2015 9:17pm
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27th Aug 2015 2:11pm
Cast;1 Verb throw (something) forcefully in a specified direction.
Synonyms: throw, toss, fling, pitch, hurl, lob;
I do see where You're coming from rt
but there is a slight discrepancy in Your
interpretation.
If You perceive it in the way of say how a
Fisherman would, then You would, "cast out,"
Your net with Hopes that perchance where,
(or say in the sense of, "Spell-casting:" You,
"cast," Your spell for a specifically required
result to occur, (for Your Benefit), or, maybe
the Benefit of someone who asks for
assistance and watch and wait to
receive the intended Yield), You
cast Your net there will be an abundance of
catch there so that when the net is dragged in,
(which, by the way, isn't a rushed thing as it
requires casting and waiting i.e Patience: You
don't cast-out and immediately drag back in
Your net), You will reap a return on Your preparation and
labor.
And furthermore if we want to study this from a
scientific point of view they will vehemently tell
us that there is no logic in Majick.
In all ruminating on the workings of Majick I have
determined that Majick requires faith in its very
ability to produce the end-result that You desire
and then You say the Chant or Prayer, (however
You choose to entitle it), and add in Your Rite to
Officiate it between, "The God or Goddess or
Deity," of Your choosing in the Hopes that they
will empower You and Your Spell to bring it to
fruition.
Really I think it builds Character in the person
who is, "Casting the Spell," if they not only just,
"Cast the Spell," and leave it at that, but also
put some effort and footwork into bringing it
about.
So I think that if the Petitioner makes their Plea
to their Deity and then begins to make Preparations
and patterns their life around whatever they're
desiring, then why would it be about equity at
all: they would seem deserving if their Intents
are Pure and meanwhile through the duration
of the preparation and process they would
ascertain understanding.
So no matter if what they had wanted ended-up
happening or not, a Reward would be indirectly
Achieved of some kind i.e of Building-up of Character
and Knowledge gained from the experience.
If one follows the Rede, "An it Harm None, do as Ye will,"
then there will be no negative consequences of
the Venture anyways.
Synonyms: throw, toss, fling, pitch, hurl, lob;
I do see where You're coming from rt
but there is a slight discrepancy in Your
interpretation.
If You perceive it in the way of say how a
Fisherman would, then You would, "cast out,"
Your net with Hopes that perchance where,
(or say in the sense of, "Spell-casting:" You,
"cast," Your spell for a specifically required
result to occur, (for Your Benefit), or, maybe
the Benefit of someone who asks for
assistance and watch and wait to
receive the intended Yield), You
cast Your net there will be an abundance of
catch there so that when the net is dragged in,
(which, by the way, isn't a rushed thing as it
requires casting and waiting i.e Patience: You
don't cast-out and immediately drag back in
Your net), You will reap a return on Your preparation and
labor.
And furthermore if we want to study this from a
scientific point of view they will vehemently tell
us that there is no logic in Majick.
In all ruminating on the workings of Majick I have
determined that Majick requires faith in its very
ability to produce the end-result that You desire
and then You say the Chant or Prayer, (however
You choose to entitle it), and add in Your Rite to
Officiate it between, "The God or Goddess or
Deity," of Your choosing in the Hopes that they
will empower You and Your Spell to bring it to
fruition.
Really I think it builds Character in the person
who is, "Casting the Spell," if they not only just,
"Cast the Spell," and leave it at that, but also
put some effort and footwork into bringing it
about.
So I think that if the Petitioner makes their Plea
to their Deity and then begins to make Preparations
and patterns their life around whatever they're
desiring, then why would it be about equity at
all: they would seem deserving if their Intents
are Pure and meanwhile through the duration
of the preparation and process they would
ascertain understanding.
So no matter if what they had wanted ended-up
happening or not, a Reward would be indirectly
Achieved of some kind i.e of Building-up of Character
and Knowledge gained from the experience.
If one follows the Rede, "An it Harm None, do as Ye will,"
then there will be no negative consequences of
the Venture anyways.
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27th Aug 2015 9:26pm
Dantalian you are so damn intelligent I'm in awe of you..
yes I see your point about investing one's self if they
hope to see their spell come to be
I am full of natural ability but need to further research
if I hope to be a true practitioner..
I sincerely appreciate the time you took
to reply in depth to this write
in turn bringing me knowledge
or opening my eyes...
Blessed Be Brenda
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27th Aug 2015 9:35pm
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27th Aug 2015 4:00pm
Dearest Brenda,
i think ive said this before, but meant it and mean it now.
This is my favorite work of yours.
To go somewhere no one will see or be seen and just breathe.
No light to shine on and show humans misdeeds. What we cant see , what no one can see, gone. Like our minds think they ought to be.
The populous finds beauty in all the wrong places. Things we find beautiful, or attracts us they label dark. How alienating! A lonely feeling.
So blow out the stars. Let us all be free to find our own wonderful things. You have created a very safe place.
Your piece made me think. Still thinking.
What i know for certain: You should be one of those stars, with the discretion enough to give privacy when due and glory too.
Love you sister in pen
🌹Jennifer
i think ive said this before, but meant it and mean it now.
This is my favorite work of yours.
To go somewhere no one will see or be seen and just breathe.
No light to shine on and show humans misdeeds. What we cant see , what no one can see, gone. Like our minds think they ought to be.
The populous finds beauty in all the wrong places. Things we find beautiful, or attracts us they label dark. How alienating! A lonely feeling.
So blow out the stars. Let us all be free to find our own wonderful things. You have created a very safe place.
Your piece made me think. Still thinking.
What i know for certain: You should be one of those stars, with the discretion enough to give privacy when due and glory too.
Love you sister in pen
🌹Jennifer
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27th Aug 2015 9:39pm
thank you lovely Jennifer for your insight on this write and for showing so much love for it :)
shining light on things I hadn't really thought of before..
in my greatest days of darkness I would project my spirit
to the furthest reaches of space and have great peace..
thank you for such a beautiful and tender closing pen sister :)
love Brenda
shining light on things I hadn't really thought of before..
in my greatest days of darkness I would project my spirit
to the furthest reaches of space and have great peace..
thank you for such a beautiful and tender closing pen sister :)
love Brenda
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I'm almost speechless Crim. Word for word, line by line, this is magic. The first stanza represents depression well. Transcendence, and your form of redemption, begins in the second. The third's cosmic, with the only light being that of the stars. The fourth finding comfort in darkness. Your sorcery begins in the fifth. Your offering is one of generosity in the sixth. Both tenderness and justice in the sixth. Freedom and some galactic repair work in the seventh. A contempt for stellar ignoramuses in the eight. Then it dovetails into a fine conclusion in the ninth. "As above, so below," is a particularly well selected ending line, maybe a final blessing. True excellence Lady!
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27th Aug 2015 9:44pm
you have such a keen eye of understanding of what someone is expressing thank you Sir Crow
for your beautiful and serious observations on this write :)
with love Crim
for your beautiful and serious observations on this write :)
with love Crim
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27th Aug 2015 6:28pm
so many long and well expressed comments on this one - I just wanted to say i read it and really enjoyed it - in fact i enjoyed it so much o went back and read it all over again
:-)
:-)
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27th Aug 2015 9:45pm
thank you David I'm so pleased you enjoyed this write so much :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. I Conjure
27th Aug 2015 8:52pm
Dearest Crim, the spellwork was potent. I was mesmerized through the entirety. Pen on.
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Re: Re. I Conjure
27th Aug 2015 9:46pm
thank you Sir Hades I'm glad you felt the power sent out here..
your visits are cherished
with love Crim
your visits are cherished
with love Crim
Re. I Conjure
27th Aug 2015 9:52pm
"I Conjure" is a very fitting define
for this divine spill! I'm sooooo loving ur experimenting with new/seldom used avenues of penning my dear! Truly amazing write, two thumbs waaaaay up!! :)
for this divine spill! I'm sooooo loving ur experimenting with new/seldom used avenues of penning my dear! Truly amazing write, two thumbs waaaaay up!! :)
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27th Aug 2015 10:07pm
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28th Aug 2015 00:13am
dearest breana...so beautiful... I see an awakening...an elevation of spirit and body...as you cast out negativity you become lighter than air.
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28th Aug 2015 2:19pm
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28th Aug 2015 00:58am
Aww CrimCrims.. you mirror & solace my moods with this. Open their eyes, darlin.. to beauty in all forms..
"pressing down
on my soft spots
so I rise above the stars "
~beautiful & fav. my gawdless- how you work a pen!
"caressing those I care for
biting, gnawing and tearing
at those I don't "
~natural selection at its wicked finest..
Feelin your *heavy here & backing your conjure by lighting my "fuck em All" candle! ;) Cascade was perfect &
word choices DIVINE..
luv-luv & *darkest sighs
~d
"pressing down
on my soft spots
so I rise above the stars "
~beautiful & fav. my gawdless- how you work a pen!
"caressing those I care for
biting, gnawing and tearing
at those I don't "
~natural selection at its wicked finest..
Feelin your *heavy here & backing your conjure by lighting my "fuck em All" candle! ;) Cascade was perfect &
word choices DIVINE..
luv-luv & *darkest sighs
~d
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28th Aug 2015 2:21pm
thank you lovely d~ you made me giggle wildly with your "fuck em All candle"
your visits and thoughts are cherished beautiful :)
with love Brenda
your visits and thoughts are cherished beautiful :)
with love Brenda
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28th Aug 2015 2:27am
Lovely visionary. Your, spell bound and star assailing lines are incredible. Rising above, and so below is where we gaze upon your beauty. Respectfully, blue angel
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28th Aug 2015 2:23pm
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2015 4:00am
Lady Crim......such vision of the night you allow us to adventure.......emotions run thru me reading this.....awesome beautiful soul you are....enjoyed this...xo :)
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28th Aug 2015 2:25pm
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28th Aug 2015 4:49am
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28th Aug 2015 1:42pm
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29th Aug 2015 9:32pm
Beautiful, and magical I love all the elements of this
spell casting just a wonderful read
spell casting just a wonderful read
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29th Aug 2015 9:52pm