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To Shout at the Sky
Skylight, shake me,
daylight, take me,
rhythm, break and bend;
Seconds, wear me,
minutes, scare me -
hours, tear and blend:
Fear, exalt me,
hear and halt me;
hold me till the end -
kiss me sweetly,
slice me neatly -
leave me here to mend.
daylight, take me,
rhythm, break and bend;
Seconds, wear me,
minutes, scare me -
hours, tear and blend:
Fear, exalt me,
hear and halt me;
hold me till the end -
kiss me sweetly,
slice me neatly -
leave me here to mend.
Published 27th Aug 2015
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27th Aug 2015 6:40am
27th Aug 2015 3:41pm
10th Sep 2015 6:04am
10th Sep 2015 9:54pm
Man I love your rhythm!!!
I don't know if you know it, but I made the "I've Got Rhythm" contest for you LOL.
I seriously think your poems deserve an award. But damn there are a lot of other talented poets that also enter my competitions and I must be a stickler for fair judgement.
If I could give two awards, I would! I'm really terrible at making decisions. I wish I could give more than one trophy, instead of just runners-up.
Please keep participating in the competitions...I know you will blow the rest of them all away soon! <3
I don't know if you know it, but I made the "I've Got Rhythm" contest for you LOL.
I seriously think your poems deserve an award. But damn there are a lot of other talented poets that also enter my competitions and I must be a stickler for fair judgement.
If I could give two awards, I would! I'm really terrible at making decisions. I wish I could give more than one trophy, instead of just runners-up.
Please keep participating in the competitions...I know you will blow the rest of them all away soon! <3
11th Sep 2015 00:09am
Thank you. Honestly, that means a lot to me. I don't intend to stop anytime soon :)
