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note to an ex-lover

breathing
fills me up

with desire
for you

i long for
asphyxiation
shakka
Written by shakka (shauna)
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WoundedHeart
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Re. note to an ex-lover
(Tams)
19th Aug 2015 00:24am
One who hasn't experienced this kind of day has never learned this tender lesson of Love.
Ahavati
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Re. note to an ex-lover
(shauna)
19th Aug 2015 00:30am
so true Ahavati.  ty.
shakka
Re. note to an ex-lover
19th Aug 2015 00:34am
I get it
Deep
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PoetSpeak
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Re. note to an ex-lover
19th Aug 2015 00:48am
I think many people can relate to this.  So much emotion in so little words. Outstanding. Just love it!
WoundedHeart
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Re. note to an ex-lover
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
19th Aug 2015 1:36am
A long asphyxiation.
Feel it doll.
Lovely. 🌹
calamitygin
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Re. note to an ex-lover
19th Aug 2015 5:34am
So much said,
So much emotion conveyed.
So few words,
Brilliant.
Keith
knot2much
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Re. note to an ex-lover
(Unveiling)
19th Aug 2015 3:56pm
beautiful Shakka love this hot submissive ink ;)

with love Crim
crimsin
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Re. note to an ex-lover
(shauna)
19th Aug 2015 11:40pm
deeper
still
PS
ty
shakka
Re. note to an ex-lover
(shauna)
19th Aug 2015 11:40pm
ty wounded heart!
shakka
Re. note to an ex-lover
(shauna)
19th Aug 2015 11:41pm
hello calamity: yes ty.
shakka
Re. note to an ex-lover
(shauna)
19th Aug 2015 11:42pm
much
emotion
maybe
too much
felt
thank you knot2
shakka
Re. note to an ex-lover
(shauna)
19th Aug 2015 11:42pm
dear crim:  ty...
shakka

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