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Mirror
Looked in the mirror today,
not the face of yesterday.
Much more gray and worn,
is it real or a joke? I am torn.
I know time has taken it's toll,
but in one night could I have
grown this old?
No way this can be,
this damn mirror is lying to me.
My once thick black hair is thinning,
in the battle my forehead is winning.
Side burns have some gray,
really did not notice that yesterday.
I tell myself this is not me,
I will not go peacefully.
So I apply the dye, cover the gray;
So I can return to yesterday.
not the face of yesterday.
Much more gray and worn,
is it real or a joke? I am torn.
I know time has taken it's toll,
but in one night could I have
grown this old?
No way this can be,
this damn mirror is lying to me.
My once thick black hair is thinning,
in the battle my forehead is winning.
Side burns have some gray,
really did not notice that yesterday.
I tell myself this is not me,
I will not go peacefully.
So I apply the dye, cover the gray;
So I can return to yesterday.
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Re. Mirror
17th Aug 2015 12:30pm
Gray looks good on men my dear. But for us women it's a different story! Enjoyed the poem, even made me giggle a time or two. 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. Mirror
18th Aug 2015 2:02am
Thank you, Miss Sissy, I will take that into consideration>
I am glad that you got a few giggles out of it.
k2m
I am glad that you got a few giggles out of it.
k2m
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Re: Re. Mirror
18th Aug 2015 1:59am
I guess you are right, some things are better just
accepted. Really cannot fight the clock> Thanks for you
kind words as always.
Keith
accepted. Really cannot fight the clock> Thanks for you
kind words as always.
Keith
Re. Mirror
17th Aug 2015 3:43pm
Re: Re. Mirror
18th Aug 2015 2:06am
Thank you so much for taking the time
to give me a read. You are right in it
being a blessing. Thanks for reminding me.
k2m
to give me a read. You are right in it
being a blessing. Thanks for reminding me.
k2m
Re. Mirror
18th Aug 2015 1:22am
Age is unavoidable, but? if we stay young & spunky at heart.. I'm convinced we live longer.
so- .. be spunky, & we ladies will only see *distinguished! ;)
great reflections misters Keith.. it flows & flows..
~d
so- .. be spunky, & we ladies will only see *distinguished! ;)
great reflections misters Keith.. it flows & flows..
~d
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Re: Re. Mirror
18th Aug 2015 2:13am
Sweetie>hi>hello
Thanks for gracing me with a read, so good to hear from you.
Gotta birthday tomorrow.Can't wait to be reminded. Well
, guess I should be happy: not quite ready for the alternative. :)
Keith
Thanks for gracing me with a read, so good to hear from you.
Gotta birthday tomorrow.Can't wait to be reminded. Well
, guess I should be happy: not quite ready for the alternative. :)
Keith
Re. Mirror
Anonymous
18th Aug 2015 4:15am
Well said. The mirror gets more and more cruel every day. I totally relate! Fun read Keith.
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Re: Re. Mirror
18th Aug 2015 4:25am
Thanks Derrick; Gotta birthday tomorrow, so that mirror has
really been on my mind.
Thanks for your
time my friend,
Keith
really been on my mind.
Thanks for your
time my friend,
Keith
Re. Mirror
2nd Oct 2015 4:09am
I have beauty secrets of my own. Shhhh dont tell anyone. <3 I dont call it getting old, I say we are wiser...
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Re: Re. Mirror
Thank you Lady, I think
your idea of it of becoming
wiser is definitely better. I woke
up that morning, one of the big
birthdays and really felt it for the first time. Great comment by the way,
thank you much
Keith
your idea of it of becoming
wiser is definitely better. I woke
up that morning, one of the big
birthdays and really felt it for the first time. Great comment by the way,
thank you much
Keith