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Peach
She's succulent
standing there
something about her
(riveting)
I'm not quite sure what
(just, suddenly, I've ripe fruit in mind)
Ebon hair, dark caramel eyes, pale skin with the flush of a peach across it, and a dusting of freckles all over
Whatever it is,
(We're both in line at the Post Office for what appears an interminable wait)
I'm fascinated
(and drooling a bit, naughty me)
for she's ripe as that peach
her glorious complexion
brings to mind
I am trying
(rather unsuccessfully)
NOT to stare
But, all I can do is think of:
how she must taste
Her skin: all peach flushed and rounded
Her lips: all luscious and plump which she keeps licking
Her curves: sweetly obscene making me ponder how one bites into juicy, ripe peaches and how the nectar cascades down one's chin
Her hair: glossy midnight in the sun and cascading around us in silk while I bring her
She turns, catches my eye
(how could she not since I've been so very brazen)
glances my way as she leaves
and smiles (I smile back)
Betimes, those waits in line at the Post Office are so worth it...
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Re. Peach
15th Aug 2015 7:35pm
beautiful Savaja what a yummy erotic..
full of sensual, juicy details..
so seductive has my mind watering for a taste ;)
masterful erotica lovely one..
with love Crim
full of sensual, juicy details..
so seductive has my mind watering for a taste ;)
masterful erotica lovely one..
with love Crim
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Re. Peach
15th Aug 2015 8:34pm
Waiting never sounded so good. You did use some words I am not familiar with; "ebon" and "betimes".
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Re. Peach
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Aug 2015 8:43pm
15th Aug 2015 8:42pm
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Re. Peach
15th Aug 2015 8:44pm
You're on to something Savaja. I'd follow this one to the ends of the earth or at least the parking lot. Read her a few of your lines and she's all yours! Particularly with that voice. An audio, perhaps? Maybe next time...
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Re. Peach
Anonymous
15th Aug 2015 9:52pm
Miss Savaja, my Queen of Raw Eroticism. . .Peach, honey, is my favorite fruit. . .and the closest I've come to comparing a woman to a peach is. . .ahem. . .porn-star extraordinaire. . .Christy Canyon. . .only because I loved the way she f*cked other women, AND I thought our bodies would mesh well with one another. . .Since then there hasn't been another I dreamed about devouring. . .It's a shame that I'm so goddamn str8ght!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Peach
15th Aug 2015 11:38pm
Re. Peach
15th Aug 2015 10:54pm
Mmmmmm so yummy n descriptive images I wanted a big bite too! lol
Sexy as hell this ink is !!
Sexy as hell this ink is !!
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Re. Peach
15th Aug 2015 11:25pm
in season. juicy fantasies like that help pass the time in such lines...
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Re. Peach
15th Aug 2015 11:26pm
Peaches. Yes...th'sweetest time of year for peaches.
I have to avoid 'going out'.
'my own fruit' seems of no a'peel to
sweet
peaches.
I have to avoid 'going out'.
'my own fruit' seems of no a'peel to
sweet
peaches.
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Re. Peach
15th Aug 2015 11:35pm
I thought i followed you. Had wondered where you were.
Ltm you were at the post offices thinking about juicy, delicious, peaches!
Funny, one of my favorite words for a womans vagina is peach fish. I learned it from Tom Robbins. Used it recently in a poem.
Anyway, this poem is delicious! I love erotic poetry with no sex in it at all. A trip to the post office, seeing your divinely described girl.
Thank you for this treat. 💋
Ltm you were at the post offices thinking about juicy, delicious, peaches!
Funny, one of my favorite words for a womans vagina is peach fish. I learned it from Tom Robbins. Used it recently in a poem.
Anyway, this poem is delicious! I love erotic poetry with no sex in it at all. A trip to the post office, seeing your divinely described girl.
Thank you for this treat. 💋
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Re. Peach
15th Aug 2015 11:55pm
Sweet juicy treat. Loved the lite sexy eroticism. I love poems that tell stories.
It was quite delicious and delightful. Thanks for sharing the experience.
k2m
It was quite delicious and delightful. Thanks for sharing the experience.
k2m
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
16th Aug 2015 3:44am
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Re. Peach
16th Aug 2015 5:14am
Re. Peach
17th Aug 2015 3:44am
Social scenery typically captivates us.
The honesty, desire and word assembly conveyed herein is worthy of applause.
*thunderous colliding palms preceding this review*
Well done!
C.
The honesty, desire and word assembly conveyed herein is worthy of applause.
*thunderous colliding palms preceding this review*
Well done!
C.
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Re. Peach
17th Aug 2015 5:05pm
I am in that line with you so vivid and delicious is your description. She was probably having visions of chocolate and fuchsia. Thank you for this delightful scene.
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Re. Peach
26th Aug 2015 10:37pm
"Her skin: all peach flushed and rounded
Her lips: all luscious and plump which she keeps licking
Her curves: sweetly obscene making me ponder how one bites into juicy, ripe peaches and how the nectar cascades down one's chin
Her hair: glossy midnight in the sun and cascading around us in silk while I bring her"
beautifully crafted and descriptive... i enjoyed the fire of this piece :)
Her lips: all luscious and plump which she keeps licking
Her curves: sweetly obscene making me ponder how one bites into juicy, ripe peaches and how the nectar cascades down one's chin
Her hair: glossy midnight in the sun and cascading around us in silk while I bring her"
beautifully crafted and descriptive... i enjoyed the fire of this piece :)
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Re. Peach
2nd Sep 2015 2:13pm