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The Letter
Today;
A letter arrived
It looked important
It felt important
Bold black ink
Particular and precise
Expensive textured paper
Light caramel off white
A professional finish
Almost a work of art
I stared at it intensly
It then became clear
My mind started racing
It was not just important
This letter was vital
I would have been unable
To begin my important task
Without this letter
It was the letter ‘A’
My alphabet had begun
I patiently waited
For the postman
To deliver the next letter
Now full of anticipation
Hoping the next letter
Would be the letter ‘B’
A letter arrived
It looked important
It felt important
Bold black ink
Particular and precise
Expensive textured paper
Light caramel off white
A professional finish
Almost a work of art
I stared at it intensly
It then became clear
My mind started racing
It was not just important
This letter was vital
I would have been unable
To begin my important task
Without this letter
It was the letter ‘A’
My alphabet had begun
I patiently waited
For the postman
To deliver the next letter
Now full of anticipation
Hoping the next letter
Would be the letter ‘B’
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Re. The Letter
14th Aug 2015 00:48am
Re: Re. The Letter
14th Aug 2015 1:34am
damn you! I bet you're the kinda guy that opens xmas presents before xmas :-) (lol)
as usual thanks for reading and commenting, I love how I can rely on you to do both :-)
as usual thanks for reading and commenting, I love how I can rely on you to do both :-)
Re. The Letter
Anonymous
14th Aug 2015 10:38am
I'm waiting to breathe out! I like the cliffhanger. I wonder if it will become a series. A soap even? Tantalizing
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Re: Re. The Letter
15th Aug 2015 1:40pm
I think it might get boring all the way to "Z" - but you may have given me an idea :-)
thank you and glad you enjoyed it :-)
thank you and glad you enjoyed it :-)
Re. The Letter
14th Aug 2015 4:55pm
Re: Re. The Letter
15th Aug 2015 1:41pm
thank you for reading and especially commenting :-)
comments brighten up my day :-)
comments brighten up my day :-)
Re. The Letter
14th Aug 2015 5:50pm
I hope the next one isn't a Z David or you'll be short changed! Very imaginative write
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Re: Re. The Letter
15th Aug 2015 1:42pm
LOL - I think people would be bored witless even getting as far a "G" :-)
thanks for reading and commenting :-)
thanks for reading and commenting :-)
Re. The Letter
14th Aug 2015 11:03pm
Re: Re. The Letter
15th Aug 2015 1:53pm
LOL - your the second person to put that idea in my head - hadn't though about it before - I might bore you all with another 24 poems :-)
thanks for reading and commenting so glad you enjoyed it :-)
thanks for reading and commenting so glad you enjoyed it :-)
Re. The Letter
15th Aug 2015 00:45am
you have me stumped David :)
though I love the anticipation you build with this write..
with love B lol :)
though I love the anticipation you build with this write..
with love B lol :)
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Re: Re. The Letter
15th Aug 2015 1:56pm
glad you enjoyed the anticipation - don't feel stumped it was just a wee piece of nonsense no deep meanings or ambiguous metaphors :-)
thank you for reading and especially commenting - love to get comments :-)
Re. The Letter
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15th Aug 2015 1:40pm
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Re: Re. The Letter
15th Aug 2015 1:57pm
thank you indeed kind sir :-)
thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment :-)
thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment :-)
Re. The Letter
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15th Aug 2015 2:09pm
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Re: Re. The Letter
16th Aug 2015 11:17am
yeah it kinda smells of primary school, just can't put my finger on it :-)
thanks for the read and the comment :-)
thanks for the read and the comment :-)