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Home...is
Home is where the hurt is;
Once she doesn't love you anymore
She doesn't say "goodbye" or "I love you,"
as you walk out the door.
You take your things and get in the car,
but turn around before going
too far. Just to ask what's going on,
but you know the answer, the love is gone.
So you leave again, your
mind begins to spin.
What have I done? The blaming
yourself has begun.
Every time you call home there's
No answer on the phone.
And when you are there,
No conversations are shared.
She barely looks at you anymore.
What's happened? You're not sure.
You just know, she doesn't
love you anymore.
When you just can't stop caring,
and you feel your heart tearing.
Because you're the only one
In love; she is still the only
one you think of.
The pain of seeing her face,
every time you enter the place.
There is a chill in the air, every time
you are there. It just reminds
you, that home is where the
hurt is.
Once she doesn't love you anymore
She doesn't say "goodbye" or "I love you,"
as you walk out the door.
You take your things and get in the car,
but turn around before going
too far. Just to ask what's going on,
but you know the answer, the love is gone.
So you leave again, your
mind begins to spin.
What have I done? The blaming
yourself has begun.
Every time you call home there's
No answer on the phone.
And when you are there,
No conversations are shared.
She barely looks at you anymore.
What's happened? You're not sure.
You just know, she doesn't
love you anymore.
When you just can't stop caring,
and you feel your heart tearing.
Because you're the only one
In love; she is still the only
one you think of.
The pain of seeing her face,
every time you enter the place.
There is a chill in the air, every time
you are there. It just reminds
you, that home is where the
hurt is.
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Re. Home...is
7th Aug 2015 4:18am
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2015 4:33am
This is a moving piece. The soft pink gates of the tender trap have become the rusted, chained barrier to what once was. There is no escape. The anchors are too heavy.

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Re: Re. Home...is
7th Aug 2015 4:39am
That is a very thoughtful and insightful interpretation.
So very much correct. Thanks for the read Sir
So very much correct. Thanks for the read Sir
Re. Home...is
7th Aug 2015 6:10am
"Home is where the hurt is; " <~ just pure genius y'know? this line cuts like no other- when home is also where the *heart is..
excellent write, shiny eyes & all. Best wishes to your happy m'friend.. it's usually waiting til one stops looking. then likes to give the swift kick, head over heels..;)
feelin ur emotions here, poignant words. hughug
~d
excellent write, shiny eyes & all. Best wishes to your happy m'friend.. it's usually waiting til one stops looking. then likes to give the swift kick, head over heels..;)
feelin ur emotions here, poignant words. hughug
~d
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Re: Re. Home...is
7th Aug 2015 6:48am
Thanks you Ms, always happy
when you make it around. Needed
happy thoughts; you are always
so generous with them. ;) good thoughts and sweet dreams.
K2m aka; Keith
when you make it around. Needed
happy thoughts; you are always
so generous with them. ;) good thoughts and sweet dreams.
K2m aka; Keith
Re. Home...is
7th Aug 2015 12:27pm
This one tugs at my heart and soul. (And yes Keith I have those 😜) No one knows what happens behind closed doors. Could be the happiest person ever on the outside but rapidly dying on the inside. Enjoyed it as always! 💕💕 Sissy
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Re: Re. Home...is
7th Aug 2015 6:38pm
Have we met somewhere before? Seems like
you always see me. Thanks for the kind comment.
Keith
you always see me. Thanks for the kind comment.
Keith
Re. Home...is
8th Aug 2015 4:13pm
The hardest part, when your heart aches, is realizing that you are the home you seek. Your body; the house, your soul; the love that lives inside it.
The woman that doesn't love you, is not meant for you. There is a love of another far greater, out there, waiting for you. That being said...waiting to heal and repair yourself kinda sucks! All just time....
The woman that doesn't love you, is not meant for you. There is a love of another far greater, out there, waiting for you. That being said...waiting to heal and repair yourself kinda sucks! All just time....
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Re: Re. Home...is
8th Aug 2015 8:15pm
thanks for the kind words and
advice Ms. loolookie. And the
taste of humor at the end. :)
advice Ms. loolookie. And the
taste of humor at the end. :)
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Re: Re. Home...is
10th Aug 2015 00:58am
I really appreciate your kind words.
Will try to bring happier thoughts
next time. Thanks for taking the time
to read and giving a comment. :)
k2m
Will try to bring happier thoughts
next time. Thanks for taking the time
to read and giving a comment. :)
k2m
Re. Home...is
14th Aug 2015 11:40pm
Ahhh, knot2much, luv ~ :-*
Such evocative words here and a wealth of distraught and suffering embedded within. You write this with such depth and insight, luv. My heart aches so when I read what seems wrenched from your heart.
Mayhap, what strikes me as most desolate by far is the sense that efforts to communicate have been rebuffed, are futile, or go sideways in defeating ways...
Tis my past experience in despairing circumstance, when all is for naught, speaking here now, luv, and may not be applicable whatsoever in this case. Somewhat reminded me: this atmosphere of disdainful neglect you so adroitly explicate... :-*
Such evocative words here and a wealth of distraught and suffering embedded within. You write this with such depth and insight, luv. My heart aches so when I read what seems wrenched from your heart.
Mayhap, what strikes me as most desolate by far is the sense that efforts to communicate have been rebuffed, are futile, or go sideways in defeating ways...
Tis my past experience in despairing circumstance, when all is for naught, speaking here now, luv, and may not be applicable whatsoever in this case. Somewhat reminded me: this atmosphere of disdainful neglect you so adroitly explicate... :-*
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Re: Re. Home...is
15th Aug 2015 2:26am
Thank you, Savaja for your kind and insightful
comments. I feel that you have seen within
my heart and truly know how I feel. Thank you again
comments. I feel that you have seen within
my heart and truly know how I feel. Thank you again