Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
9th Aug 2015 9:27am
In so few words one can visualise the couple at the height of desire, before consummation..
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7th Sep 2015 2:59am
Ahhh, shakka, luv ~ :-*
It took me a bit, but here I am. I began at the end and realized, quickly, I needed to retreat and begin at the start. :-*
You, luv, are rather magnificent you know. ;-*
I'll have to read them all, you know. Twas difficult enough to make my way here without being waylaid by your gloriousness along the path.
I rather adore this poem, luv. I am enamored of the way you weave submission almost imperceptibly into the very weft of it. And, how the submission is implicit in the words used describing nights and in your oh-so-clever verb usage.
What master crafting this is, luv! ;-* You are rather brilliant. I find that so very enticing...
It took me a bit, but here I am. I began at the end and realized, quickly, I needed to retreat and begin at the start. :-*
You, luv, are rather magnificent you know. ;-*
I'll have to read them all, you know. Twas difficult enough to make my way here without being waylaid by your gloriousness along the path.
I rather adore this poem, luv. I am enamored of the way you weave submission almost imperceptibly into the very weft of it. And, how the submission is implicit in the words used describing nights and in your oh-so-clever verb usage.
What master crafting this is, luv! ;-* You are rather brilliant. I find that so very enticing...
8th Sep 2015 00:00am
Savaja: You are quite astute. Yes, submission is weaved in this tiny poem...even tho. I wasn't really aware. TY ffor the kind words.
