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Owing a Daemon's Due..
My every wish, opens empty small fists.. of 'cannot have'
all I see, unreachable dreams.. there is no curing salve.
Daemons ply triteness baited ..up-summing caustic misdeeds.
Thus they sing sadistically, sharp contretemps in verbal sting:
"..We scan bones- every scare, draining blood 'til weakened bare..
we simply cannot cureth.. the transparent Is-Not-There!"
As they ceaselessly slice away, mocked progress commences.
I ride high pain, no gripping mane ..jumping iron fences.
Lulled pacifiers signify dulled tokens at endgame-
riddle still damned, I am.. tailed-fiends don't bother with my name..
"..At this stage, Mrs. thirty-something.. count life as your blessing,"
Truth not daemons touching 'pon.. "sorry for your suffering."
(Needlessly, evil stated after 'just' three failed attempts.)
By this point, my soul knows.. there will never be another fence.
Advice? ..from learn-ed me, to each health-craving heartbeat made-
'Nay-say' daemons bespoken ..If it be 'just a bit broken'..
Their healing- further offered, may create high cost foul-play,
as when true time promise came, my strict Dues starkly lain.
Once said yes, none can attest the cure's sweetly ripened fruit,
a surgeon's curse might be much worse- if bones fall destitute.
Of 'course.. They probably owe a daemon favor ..or two.
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
4th Aug 2015 11:43pm
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 4:23pm
C'mere sweetest Taryn, my Faerie Queen.. you heal me with perfect soul magicks
and fancy dust every unholy be-damn'ed day! promise..*mwahs
I am grateful for your shoulder & hugs all-times.. you are the best, my seester.. & damn! wish I'd had you in my pocket in younger days, wuda enjoyed the back-up.. telling off drs & many other expletive-based adj's) of people, dontcha knw?
lovins on ur morn!
~d
and fancy dust every unholy be-damn'ed day! promise..*mwahs
I am grateful for your shoulder & hugs all-times.. you are the best, my seester.. & damn! wish I'd had you in my pocket in younger days, wuda enjoyed the back-up.. telling off drs & many other expletive-based adj's) of people, dontcha knw?
lovins on ur morn!
~d
Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 11:47pm
Oh my, I so hoped this wouldn't happen to you. I wish there was something I could do to put a smile on your pretty face. Shit!
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 4:39pm
Awwes.. & your warm friendship always puts me to smile Jerry.. thx darlins, fer ur grand insights & giggles!
when life blows.. I keep my friends close, to help kick-ass..& ur soo on that list misters..
hughugs to you m'dear ;)
~d
when life blows.. I keep my friends close, to help kick-ass..& ur soo on that list misters..
hughugs to you m'dear ;)
~d
Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 00:39am
Omg...That opening stanza alone just destroyed me... Brilliant spill my friend!
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 4:52pm
sweet hells dearie.. meant no slayin on my watch.. sorries bout that..
hugs cuz you're much the empath these days ..Adore you taking time on my woes by verse ;)
you are awesome.. wishin a great morn to you dearest!
~d
hugs cuz you're much the empath these days ..Adore you taking time on my woes by verse ;)
you are awesome.. wishin a great morn to you dearest!
~d
Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 3:07am
"Lulled pacifiers signify dulled tokens at endgame." Fantastic wording as always Darksighs, and the introduction of "Mrs. thirty-something" could be more than a personal touch. Maybe a reimagining of some harsh reality, with surgeons being the high priests (or dark wizards) of the medical profession. I can read this multiple times and still savor, so on the list it goes. Excellent!
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 6:11pm
Hihi's sweet sir of Crow.. insightful you, always!
"surgeons being the high priests (or dark wizards) of the medical profession."
~you sum perfectly m'dear, refer to all surgeons as feigned saints/my daemons.
too many in it fer the $.. and othrs try to heal but make worse. and the beat goes on.. ;)
I very much appreciate the time you give my works hun.. duly-adored, promise!
wishin you a great day, grins n all..
~d
"surgeons being the high priests (or dark wizards) of the medical profession."
~you sum perfectly m'dear, refer to all surgeons as feigned saints/my daemons.
too many in it fer the $.. and othrs try to heal but make worse. and the beat goes on.. ;)
I very much appreciate the time you give my works hun.. duly-adored, promise!
wishin you a great day, grins n all..
~d
Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..t
5th Aug 2015 3:07am
Oh I could barely finish it. So much hurt and pain. Breaks my heart for you.
You have such at talent at conveying your emotions. I cannot wait
to read of a happier day.
You have such at talent at conveying your emotions. I cannot wait
to read of a happier day.
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..t
5th Aug 2015 6:19pm
Omg.. you get hugs man!.. ty so much fer the read.. these bad days do slip out but I shall endeavor to post a happy mush soon ;) ..must find where I tossed my happy pen.. lol
loves havin you here, it means much. smiles to your day ;)
~d
loves havin you here, it means much. smiles to your day ;)
~d
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
5th Aug 2015 4:58am
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 6:32pm
oh goodness & lordie.. you're prayers are a sweet body balm, dearest one.. I am warmed and given hope to be reminded of such tranquil days..
have much respect and loves for you my friend, & eternally giving you soul-hugs for your lovely thoughts..
and hand squeezes..w/grateful shiny eyes..
best days be yours my lady ;)
~d
have much respect and loves for you my friend, & eternally giving you soul-hugs for your lovely thoughts..
and hand squeezes..w/grateful shiny eyes..
best days be yours my lady ;)
~d
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2015 6:35am
No comment. . .except that I'm jealous, speechless, and more speechless. . .Wait!. . .Did I mention, SPEECHLESS?. . .This is brilliant, Miss DS. . .excellent flow, wordplay, and an absolute brain teaser. . .Enjoyed!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 7:18pm
LadyDevlin.. omg.. you have me busting into laughter here.. sweet hells, I needed it, ty!
you are such a fav talent of mine at dup.. makes me feel warm n fuzzy to have you here darlins, hugs
fer your time & the smiles ;).
daydreamin we,
~d
you are such a fav talent of mine at dup.. makes me feel warm n fuzzy to have you here darlins, hugs
fer your time & the smiles ;).
daydreamin we,
~d
Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 6:42am
Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 7:52pm
Curtsies of thanks, kind misters.. was certainly one of 'those' days..
& grateful to have a pen handy too.. lol
Very fancy to see you.. tyty.. good day wishes ;)
~d
& grateful to have a pen handy too.. lol
Very fancy to see you.. tyty.. good day wishes ;)
~d
Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 7:54am
So deep i can feel the pain when reading an amazing piece great job. Always here if you need a friend as well.
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 9:01pm
aww.. hugs lil miss..ty for that.. I soo much appreciate your visits!
hope that you are making gorgeous memories out there, sweetie..
bright wishes,
~d
hope that you are making gorgeous memories out there, sweetie..
bright wishes,
~d
Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 2:53pm
So much hurt and despair! I felt my heart breaking as I was reading..Praying that you find peace! 💕💕 EOD
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
7th Aug 2015 7:38am
Such a darling to take time & comment.. many warm thanks EOD, much appreciated!
shiny nite to you ;)
~d
shiny nite to you ;)
~d
Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
5th Aug 2015 5:45pm
lovely d~ so in awe of your talent in expressing yourself..
also feel the hurt and pain of this write on a deep level..
I also wish you some peace with love Crim
also feel the hurt and pain of this write on a deep level..
I also wish you some peace with love Crim
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
7th Aug 2015 7:42am
Hugs for your sweet presence LadyCrim.. all-ways means much to have a visit from you..;)
wishing you a sparkled eve darlins, ty..
~d
wishing you a sparkled eve darlins, ty..
~d
Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
6th Aug 2015 8:41pm
This. "My every wish, opens empty small fists.. of 'cannot have'
all I see, unreachable dreams.. there is no curing salve. "
This.
I seem to live by this rule. Except, maybe more of" I want what I should not have"
You have become the pied piper. With the harmony in your words, you will soon enchant those demons to listen to you.
all I see, unreachable dreams.. there is no curing salve. "
This.
I seem to live by this rule. Except, maybe more of" I want what I should not have"
You have become the pied piper. With the harmony in your words, you will soon enchant those demons to listen to you.
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Re: Re. Owing a Daemon's Due..
7th Aug 2015 7:47am
I tried the pie and it *totally failed.. wha-?? ..was I *not a'posta eat it..? ooohh.. gotcha.. lol.
Will probably hafta settle as siren bc I'm terrible learning the wind instruments..;)
enjoy your witty comments misters, have a great night!
~d
Will probably hafta settle as siren bc I'm terrible learning the wind instruments..;)
enjoy your witty comments misters, have a great night!
~d