Angel Petite

:)  Thank you, Taryn.  Been holding out on posting here long enough I figured.  "Hot" I will take as a good compliment, coming from someone who I know melts her pens regularly.  Thanks for stopping by, dear.
 
Michael

you said vein.... i'm fecking finished now
*
my darlin taryn quoted my fave passage here, it's absolutely lip-licking sensuality
loved this!

Rofl, Katja. Not sure I even wanna touch on that one.  :)  made my day though.  Thank you for the read and the laugh.
 
Michael

Wowzers!!! This is a hot write with great arousing lines.......sweated thru this one.....excellent...xo :)

Thank you, flowergirl, for the wonderful compliments.  Lol at making u sweat.  :)    
 
Michael

whispers and sighs
turn moans to cries
                                       My favorite lines
                                               Smoking hot write
                                                        Favorite of the day

Thank you K2m for stopping by and replying.  I am partial to that particular line myself.  Always things beneath the surface with me.  :)
 
Michael

I'm glad to be the first to add this to my reading lists.
Sometimes I get immensed in a poem, it leaves me
breathless, now is such a time.

Michael it only gets better. You take the reader
through a journey of passion, filled with adventure,
yet that burning thirst for your poems subsist.

A poet is a poet every step of the way.

Ah, sincere thanks  Victoria for such a warm compliment, and for the RL add.  :)  You've made my night.  Seldom will I sacrifice content for form... occasionally will let form go for content.  Most times I truly don't pay attention...lol   Been doing it too long I guess.
 
Michael

"Your touch, your face, your well of grace  
That I keep bringing to spill.  
Tight spot beneath... your neck, my teeth!  
You softly pleading, "I will."  .."
~the soft, the hard.. and the passion of submit to please, all present & perfect.

"The arch of back, nails painted black   <~!!
Digging sharp into my skin.  
Those nipples, pert... the fuk!  the hurt!  <~ fav here
How you love wearing my skin!"              <~ and Yes, fav ..here ;)
~the wearing, being most gd romantic!

"Daylight outside won't slow this ride,  
But oh what a night it's been."
~tried & true, this one, love. omfg.. still hot thoughts!  
   
Great title choice.. and a bit deceptive on angels & innocence. lol. but adore the non-innocent hurting while loving to please..
very dripping lines, as in a sweet weep from *both ends.. you are ruthless w/that naughty pen of yours, y'know? [oh, you Do] ;)
mwahs to you,
~T
   

Sweet thanks to you my baby, not only for the wonderful reply but for the inspiration.  Had to go with the angel theme cuase u are truly heaven on earth... though I realize *our heaven might have slightly different standards than the generally perceived. ;)  Ruthless is a general aim for me...but then u know that as well, too.  Dont you, gorgeous.  *kisses.
 
Michael

Ahhh, Michael Anderson, luv ~ :-*

Mercy! How I missed this one, I'll never fathom.

I believe you should write more erotica, luv... ;-* (and, that's my considered opinion, for what it's worth ;-p)

I am aflame here. Tis your fault. This stanza here was my Waterloo, entitre, luv:

A buck fifteen, my darkened queen,  
I dream splitting you in two.  
Knees pinned by head, your cunt well-fed,  
Where I drive all into you!  

Mercy...such incroyable imagery! ;-*

Yes, luv, I'll be requiring more erotic poesy from your pen...

Ah, thank you so much, dear... I take that as high praise coming from someone of your caliber in the erotica department.  Working 60 hours a week right now so my time on boards has been severely limited but shall endeavor to post here more often.  :)  d
Did manage to squeak out another erotic tonight.  Hoping to have some time to catch up on reading and replying soon.
 
Michael