lure of cheap sex

I doubt that she deserves you John.  Still might be a lot of fun if and when she gets home.  I'll settle for cheap sex but I've always paid a high price, not being one to resist the lure.  Just reel me in.  

John she sounds very seductive this little minx.. enjoyed taking a journey with you seeing her through your eyes.. great inking with love Crim  p.s. I can't imagine anyone more clever than you :)

Great ink sir

"is that a selfish demand? " .. A sweet 'Hell No' not too much to ask.. to your Q.

"she spins like a
slutty ballerina"
~heart slicing line.. beauty from your pen, none the less.

"every star in the sky
falls before she’s ready to slip out of her heels,"
~just perfect. the femme fatale, painted in heels slipping off.
great soul searchin write sirJ.. best of day to you ;)
~d

sincere raw yet eloquent ..first 3 words that come to mind...your words have such a vividness to them that leaves some deep imprints..and that last stanza dropped like an anvil..

"I love you, with no excuse for it nor enough whiskey to burn
it out, & when you get home, I will punish you…
or I will give you up." ...

umph!!
'nuff said

powerful write indeed!!!

Some are addicted to the lure of new flesh no matter the cost...even if it means losing the one waiting for you at home...an honest, exquisitely written poem JohnFeddeler....

ooh baby laying down the law and rightfully so.  
I think there can be many underlying issues when people feel entitled to have more than one person who is fully devoted to them.
But, it takes a whole lot of patience to love a 'selfish' person like that.

"I’m sorry, I don’t understand. if a man provides his woman
with a good home, if he respects & loves her, & all he
requires in return is that she spends her nights with him,
so that he is not alone & hurt, & has the service & the heat
of her body in his bed, is that a selfish demand? "

God, I wish I had someone to take care of me right now, sir. For once. I can only stay strong for so long...
Beautiful words, as always.

tpd

First off ... Love the artwork, as always your artistic choices compliment your work brilliantly ...     Secondly, I'll play devil's advocate to some of the comments ...     Why is it when we read (or write) about the conquest of men they're called "rogues" - "bad boys" - "Don Juans" ... (As the old saying goes: a man can be forgiven ANYTHING, except a dead woman or a live boy ...)     Yet a woman who explores her sexuality to the fullest - despite having the foundations of a complete home ... is often called a "slut" or "whore" ... ? Why? ... Why the doube standard? (rhetorical)      Remember the George Clooney movie, "Up in the Air" ... ?

Thank you.

Mister Feddeler, there's nothing twenty feet of good rope & a flogger can't fix...
"I love you, with no excuse for it nor enough whiskey to burn
it out, & when you get home, I will punish you…
or I will give you up."
^^^
... sometimes a man's just gotta put his foot down because women don't always factor the cost
xoxox

An excellent meditation on freedom of the soul. Free to love and free to leave. If that is what our soul is inclined to do.

Sometimes people are addicted to the forbidden thrills as much as they are rebellious behaviour. Addicted being the key word...

Sordid cunnilingus. Maybe thats the problem. But by any account these words find you, and make you feel. Honest. I dig it. 💋

So honest and strong. It pulls you in and you can see every word dancing in your mind.

Interesting narrative, especially in the intro. Fierce way to get her attention there in the end! - blue angel

Very brave poem and often times so unforgivingly true.