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that one confused look
alone and scared
don't know how long
I can keep up the ruse
broken and used
i'm feeling so blue
inside my soul
inside my heart
nothing left in there
too much
too much
pain
bleeding
instant healing
cannot pursue
all the thoughts in my mind
the words are so mixed
rhyme is abused
bleeding is out
inking it out
tumbling to find
a way outside
this prison i've made
inside these lines
music to soothe
dreams to be used
i'm breaking it down
just.one..more...time....
don't know how long
I can keep up the ruse
broken and used
i'm feeling so blue
inside my soul
inside my heart
nothing left in there
too much
too much
pain
bleeding
instant healing
cannot pursue
all the thoughts in my mind
the words are so mixed
rhyme is abused
bleeding is out
inking it out
tumbling to find
a way outside
this prison i've made
inside these lines
music to soothe
dreams to be used
i'm breaking it down
just.one..more...time....
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Re. that one confused look
24th Jul 2015 5:06am
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Re. that one confused look
9th Aug 2015 1:40am
I'm bit of a recluse & a lady, so very often
finding myself a mirrored reflection of your very words.. Afraid of something or many somethings, I come out only to be shut in again. No.. my mere shadow love it isn't pleasant but its who I am, very much we need to feel love thrice as strong & must be allowed to do so as well with reassurance.
.. .powerfully felt hun
finding myself a mirrored reflection of your very words.. Afraid of something or many somethings, I come out only to be shut in again. No.. my mere shadow love it isn't pleasant but its who I am, very much we need to feel love thrice as strong & must be allowed to do so as well with reassurance.
.. .powerfully felt hun
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Re: Re. that one confused look
9th Aug 2015 2:14am
Ive always felt introverted and somewhat closed from everyone else which is what stemmed this piece that feeling of wanting to express that deep recess inside and it doesn't matter whether I think it's pleasent or not it's who you are and i wouldn't think of changing anything for it would change everything about you and who you are and love is something that just is this complicated mess of emotion that needs getting used to
I'm glad you wrote this
I'm glad you wrote this
Re. that one confused look
11th Aug 2015 00:53am
such relativism around the same time period. july was a dark dark month for me; very good write. glad to have come across your profile.
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11th Aug 2015 4:10am
I'm glad you've enjoyed this piece and its content misery does tend to enjoy company