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Dark Chiming
Dark bells ring, crisp on snow
as all-fierce chiming grows.
Silky shadows rage tall.
Stumbling 'midst hungry stones,
I falter to break fall.
Hands fending torn tree bark,
I pause for those dark bells..
deep breathing arctic spark.
'Feel sky obey, blizzard reigns
yet the bleak chiming stills,
as I sink, weak.. and fade..
Fade into cruel winter,
sink as pale iced bone..
Fade from time's Forever..
(chilled wish, I have ever)
"I just want to go home"
Home.. to warm loyal arms,
my blazed candle inside.
Ensconced from world charms,
there, faithful, we reside.
Lit up at my center
smoldered balmy and bold.
Home is where my love lies,
home.. is for'never cold.
Knee-deep, ..nearly covered
by purest white storm's fall,
I recall.. 'love left me'..
minus hope granting peace.
Then.. I know nothing at all.
Dark bells commence chiming,
numb emotion spills weep.
I shan't ever sing along,
lain frozen, snowy sleep.
Instrumental Challenge By Zazzles
song link #5.. Christmas Eve/ Sarajevo [Timeless Version]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHioIlbnS_A&list=PLD23362D97B443EB7
Published 18th Jul 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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18th Jul 2015 3:17am
"Dark bells ring, crisp on snow
as all-fierce chiming grows.
Silky shadows rage tall.
Stumbling 'midst hungry stones,
I falter to break fall. " .... Great first stanza, the hook, "Dark bells ring, crisp on snow" like that image very much... it just feels right my friend... Hows every little thing: wolf
as all-fierce chiming grows.
Silky shadows rage tall.
Stumbling 'midst hungry stones,
I falter to break fall. " .... Great first stanza, the hook, "Dark bells ring, crisp on snow" like that image very much... it just feels right my friend... Hows every little thing: wolf
18th Jul 2015 3:29am
Ever fancy, you are, darlins.. ty fer the visit!
Hope all is righteous wif u, I'm in dangle at moment
but can always muster a smile fer my fav wolf ;)
hope ur nite shines solid m'dears,
~d
Hope all is righteous wif u, I'm in dangle at moment
but can always muster a smile fer my fav wolf ;)
hope ur nite shines solid m'dears,
~d
18th Jul 2015 6:34am
"Dark bells commence chiming,
numb emotion spills weep.
I shan't ever sing along,
lain frozen, snowy sleep.
An enchanting poem, that line grips me at my deepest point.
What a wonderful write, painted such a vivid image.
Best of wishes to you miss.
numb emotion spills weep.
I shan't ever sing along,
lain frozen, snowy sleep.
An enchanting poem, that line grips me at my deepest point.
What a wonderful write, painted such a vivid image.
Best of wishes to you miss.
20th Jul 2015 8:06pm
You are the sweetest darlin, & ty for the lovely comment m'friend!
hope you have eversmiles today, misterz ;)
~d
hope you have eversmiles today, misterz ;)
~d
18th Jul 2015 7:28am
20th Jul 2015 8:13pm
OMG.. luv-luv having you JJ.. must say, it makes my day to see you here m'dears!
ty so much, promised this fer Jackie's comp & got totally inspired by the xmas
bells in 1/6 songs available to write on..
ever a'curtsy fer ur read, be well m'friend,
~d/T
ty so much, promised this fer Jackie's comp & got totally inspired by the xmas
bells in 1/6 songs available to write on..
ever a'curtsy fer ur read, be well m'friend,
~d/T
20th Jul 2015 4:31am
20th Jul 2015 8:20pm
Warmin' my day, you are m'sirz o D!.. tyty fer checkin out my freezing comp entry..
sweet day to you, I'm a'witchily hopin,
hugs n'stuf,
~d
sweet day to you, I'm a'witchily hopin,
hugs n'stuf,
~d
22nd Jul 2015 2:38am
haunting gothic bells in white-out conditions. despairingly surreal poetry...
23rd Jul 2015 9:47am
For certes, a bad dream within my dream.. thank you everly for the stop-in SirJ..
I wish you well & smile on your eve m'friend ;)
~d
I wish you well & smile on your eve m'friend ;)
~d
23rd Jul 2015 3:03am
Ahhh, darksighs, luv ~ :-*
This poem of yours is so emotion-filled and heartbreaking, I am sitting here with tears trickling down my face. I begin to see I must endeavor to come armored to your page, luv. :-*
I would that I could ease this pain for thee somehow.
Your gift of poesy is so excruciatingly fine, my darling artiste savant. You paint emotions finely and devastatingly well, you do. They leap into one's soul and embed themselves deeply, luv. :-*
This poem of yours is so emotion-filled and heartbreaking, I am sitting here with tears trickling down my face. I begin to see I must endeavor to come armored to your page, luv. :-*
I would that I could ease this pain for thee somehow.
Your gift of poesy is so excruciatingly fine, my darling artiste savant. You paint emotions finely and devastatingly well, you do. They leap into one's soul and embed themselves deeply, luv. :-*
23rd Jul 2015 9:55am
My sweetest of minds, I luv having you Lady*S!
grinning much at thots of you in 'Armor de Amour(less)' to my pages.. *lmsao
too much cute brilliance you have..;)
*always, your presence bringeth my smile, & I am *squeezin' ur hand wif matchin' tears fer ur kind words.
love n all else of m'heart, I thank u!
mwahs
~d
grinning much at thots of you in 'Armor de Amour(less)' to my pages.. *lmsao
too much cute brilliance you have..;)
*always, your presence bringeth my smile, & I am *squeezin' ur hand wif matchin' tears fer ur kind words.
love n all else of m'heart, I thank u!
mwahs
~d
