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Moonlit Skin
Your silk moonlit skin kills me
No longer akin
Aching to be long
In your heart it hurts
Where's my touch?
You secured my ego
In a shell with a ribbon
Gently tugged the knot
With your delicate fingers
In one pull you can undo me
Your perfumed words
Aromatically fill my senses
Since i seen you
Last...
No longer akin
Aching to be long
In your heart it hurts
Where's my touch?
You secured my ego
In a shell with a ribbon
Gently tugged the knot
With your delicate fingers
In one pull you can undo me
Your perfumed words
Aromatically fill my senses
Since i seen you
Last...
Published 14th Jul 2015
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14th Jul 2015 8:18pm
Perfumed words are better than being alone. Having something to remember helps, maybe a past visit that still tides you over. Skin and moonlight all the way until next time. Love this one DPW!
14th Jul 2015 8:31pm
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15th Jul 2015 00:56am
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15th Jul 2015 10:19pm
16th Jul 2015 8:57pm
16th Jul 2015 8:45pm
"You secured my ego
In a shell with a ribbon
Gently tugged the knot
With your delicate fingers
In one pull you can undo me"
~completely relate to this weak-kneed anticipation.
vulnerability & trust must go hand'n'hand to avoid the longing it seems.
Great capture poet! ..be well,
~d
In a shell with a ribbon
Gently tugged the knot
With your delicate fingers
In one pull you can undo me"
~completely relate to this weak-kneed anticipation.
vulnerability & trust must go hand'n'hand to avoid the longing it seems.
Great capture poet! ..be well,
~d
16th Jul 2015 9:01pm
Thank you darksighs for the read and comment. Vulnerability and trust go together like guardedness and suspicion do.
16th Jul 2015 11:43pm
5th Aug 2015 5:11am
Gets us all wrapped up until we can feel the tug forever. Invisible ribbons...
5th Aug 2015 2:10pm
Anonymous
12th Jul 2017 6:55pm
Very intense and vivid!
