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Etude {w~HowlingWhelms}
Oh how thou pierce me greatly
underneath, as if I am in
nothing but my skin's
attire.. bare, nude & posed
just awaiting for it
every time .. to feel your
soft punctures wounding me
no embellishment must obstruct your aura
no garment of silk or sackcloth
no jeweled necklace, pearls, nor golden rings
you are wild flower & raw sugar
blind are the poets who labor to portrait you
they, who have never seen beauty
I will lick the blood from your wounds
I will drink from your well of sorrow
underneath, as if I am in
nothing but my skin's
attire.. bare, nude & posed
just awaiting for it
every time .. to feel your
soft punctures wounding me
no embellishment must obstruct your aura
no garment of silk or sackcloth
no jeweled necklace, pearls, nor golden rings
you are wild flower & raw sugar
blind are the poets who labor to portrait you
they, who have never seen beauty
I will lick the blood from your wounds
I will drink from your well of sorrow
Published 14th Jul 2015
| Edited 2nd Aug 2015
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Anonymous
14th Jul 2015 8:11am
Nothing beats natural beauty
a lovely write, enjoyed read
the visuals are astounding.
a lovely write, enjoyed read
the visuals are astounding.
Anonymous
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14th Jul 2015 8:17am
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14th Jul 2015 11:33am
14th Jul 2015 8:12pm
Excellent collaboration. The slightly archaic tone is perfect, and the imagery is both beautiful and disturbing, a tough balance.
14th Jul 2015 8:29pm
This was a beautiful collaboration. Both parts compliment each other.
14th Jul 2015 9:09pm
15th Jul 2015 1:31am
Ahhh, JohnFeddeler and Noire HowlingWhelms, luvs ~
What gloriousness you evince here, the two of you. This is by turns extraordinarily intimate and astoundingly brazen, erotica bloodied and gentle... :-*
Again, you surpass wildest expectation, luvs, delving even more deeply and with such exquisite delicacy of care.
Marvelous, profoundly intimate, sweetly penetrating and raw... :-*
What gloriousness you evince here, the two of you. This is by turns extraordinarily intimate and astoundingly brazen, erotica bloodied and gentle... :-*
Again, you surpass wildest expectation, luvs, delving even more deeply and with such exquisite delicacy of care.
Marvelous, profoundly intimate, sweetly penetrating and raw... :-*
J'adore toi..
I adore us being founded & tethered within our inner dialect to dialect, I call it heart to heart my Knight. Thank you for sharing yourself with me. Bowing delicately.
Such a sweet feeling that's genuine in its own way,
I adore us being founded & tethered within our inner dialect to dialect, I call it heart to heart my Knight. Thank you for sharing yourself with me. Bowing delicately.
Such a sweet feeling that's genuine in its own way,
16th Jul 2015 00:22am
A very stirring love poem.. a great collaboration igniting passion in my heart with love Crim
23rd Jul 2015 6:10pm
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6th Aug 2015 6:04pm
It seems that as I read your poetry I am sucked in by the magic of each one. You are a wordsmith of extraordinary skill. Bravo.
