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Elemental
Cold kiss of fog
Upon my lips
Lost winter's shadow
Haunting my fingertips
Bring me
Screaming ecstasy
That first ineluctable insinuation
Of your phallus
Inside
Quivering 'round you
My honeypot is sultry
Silken inferno
Clasped snug
I'm begging you
To move
To let me move
To touch my ornate jewel
(Impudent ruby it's become)
Suffused with passion am I
Around us, the fog coalesces
Whispering nebulous tickles
Criss-cross our bodies
Elementals' playful lovemaking
Coinciding with our own
No?
Joining us
Interconnected
Inclusive
Exclusively divine
They stay
You play
I plead
They knead
You ply
I cry
Soft rain
What relief!
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Re: Elemental
14th Jul 2015 3:13am
Re: Elemental
14th Jul 2015 4:42am
sensual elements: whispers like the wind, the veiling fog, the rain that comes. & comes...
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Re: Elemental
14th Jul 2015 5:12am
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14th Jul 2015 7:49am
Sounds like a stormy night with no shelter to keep the rain from tickling the flesh of lovers... sweet imagery!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Elemental
14th Jul 2015 3:41pm
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14th Jul 2015 8:17pm
This is incredibly seductive, feel like I could taste it like ripe juicy cherries 🍒 love this. 💋
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Re: Elemental
14th Jul 2015 8:57pm
Your eroticism has the taste of elegance, Savaja. Heady stuff! "Honeypot" isn't a term I've come across in a while.
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Anonymous
15th Jul 2015 7:31pm
As always Iove it!
and your erotic sense that drives me crazy.Plus imagining your voice with it.
Lovely as always
and your erotic sense that drives me crazy.Plus imagining your voice with it.
Lovely as always
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Desire Fueled
15th Jul 2015 11:51pm
Savaja, your descriptive language is so deliciously provocative. You always bring a smile to my face. Your poetry is a powerful stimulant.
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Passion Fueled
15th Jul 2015 11:52pm
Savaja, your descriptive language is so deliciously provocative. You always bring a smile to my face. Your poetry is a powerful stimulant.
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Re. Elemental
16th Jul 2015 5:57am
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Anonymous
16th Jul 2015 6:38am
Another beautiful write by the Queen of Eroticism herself, Miss Lady Savaja. . .always sultry, always intoxicating, always an honor to read. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re. Elemental
17th Jul 2015 12:55pm
Elemental huh? Hhhmmmm it's very intellectual on one hand BUT the other hand...? Well let's just say OMFG!!! busy hand alert!! lol
Hotness my dear :)
Hotness my dear :)
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17th Jul 2015 8:50pm
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20th Jul 2015 6:57pm
Re. Elemental
23rd Jul 2015 6:23am
You got me twice with the same poem...your sultry voice adds an extra layer of passionate imagery to an already sexy scene... JJ
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Re. Elemental
23rd Jul 2015 11:57am
"Bring me".. <<~~ (!!) *That.. is all it took fer sultry shivers Lady*S..
you are still my Queen honeypot of vocal Eros, doll!
makes me wholly appreciate the update function, sweetly alerting me when you
have added voice ;) awesome, that is..
layin' big lovz on u fer this.. can't 'not' enjoy ur journey to rain w/u y'knw? (yes, u must) grin.
mwah~mwahs to ur well-done piece..
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you are still my Queen honeypot of vocal Eros, doll!
makes me wholly appreciate the update function, sweetly alerting me when you
have added voice ;) awesome, that is..
layin' big lovz on u fer this.. can't 'not' enjoy ur journey to rain w/u y'knw? (yes, u must) grin.
mwah~mwahs to ur well-done piece..
~d
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Re. Elemental
23rd Jul 2015 4:04pm
it's killin me.....(just Get It Over Wit, ol'fool).....
Iyam useless,hopeless in this cosmicomic joke of 'I'.
...good for a laugh to die laughing for
Iyam useless,hopeless in this cosmicomic joke of 'I'.
...good for a laugh to die laughing for
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24th Jul 2015 1:03pm
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Re. Elemental
27th Jul 2015 4:31am
wow you created a epic sexy ink Savaja... and your voice always fire too *whew* thank you for sharing this with us :D
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Re. Elemental
29th Jul 2015 10:08pm
Am loving this one, yet I melt into passionate pools of many. Too beautiful, is what I see. Tasteful, seductive and something too be taken delicately. Yes, elementally intrigued. Kiss kiss Mon miel
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Re. Elemental
31st Jul 2015 2:57pm
There is nothing I don't love about this piece. I want to taste and smell, touch it. Its seduction seems tangible.
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