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Bleed out in the Love Ghetto
I didn't want to believe in our love
Because I knew it would go down in flames
You fought really hard for my commitment
Until I gave it to you, then you discarded me
Translation: You threw me out
But kept my heart, my bones on the roadside
Fresh kill
Bleed out in the love ghetto
The joke's on you though babe
I always come back
With scars but smarter
Next time just prostitutes
Transactions consummated
No fault love loss
Everyone wins, no tumors, no malignancy
Because I knew it would go down in flames
You fought really hard for my commitment
Until I gave it to you, then you discarded me
Translation: You threw me out
But kept my heart, my bones on the roadside
Fresh kill
Bleed out in the love ghetto
The joke's on you though babe
I always come back
With scars but smarter
Next time just prostitutes
Transactions consummated
No fault love loss
Everyone wins, no tumors, no malignancy
Published 12th Jul 2015
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12th Jul 2015 4:24pm
12th Jul 2015 4:48pm
Thx Jennifer
I have a lot to choose from, looking forward to your comments ...
I have a lot to choose from, looking forward to your comments ...
12th Jul 2015 6:00pm
"But kept my heart, my bones on the roadside"
~best damn hard love line ever!
you rock, Poets!
better with knowledge & scars, safe that way.
smiles fer your day ;)
~d
~best damn hard love line ever!
you rock, Poets!
better with knowledge & scars, safe that way.
smiles fer your day ;)
~d
12th Jul 2015 6:29pm
I love writing these tears in your beers heart breakers ...
Glad you liked x
Glad you liked x
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12th Jul 2015 6:30pm
12th Jul 2015 6:32pm
Woow, oh my this thuds beyond the beat behind
the breast cage. How enormously felt, this
merely satisfies my craving for reading.
Am speechlessly enthralled.
the breast cage. How enormously felt, this
merely satisfies my craving for reading.
Am speechlessly enthralled.
12th Jul 2015 7:13pm
12th Jul 2015 11:34pm
"I didn't want to believe in our love
Because I knew it would go down in flames"
and yet what choice do we really have when it's upon us? I'll jump that train every time...and go down in flames on it. :)
Michael
Because I knew it would go down in flames"
and yet what choice do we really have when it's upon us? I'll jump that train every time...and go down in flames on it. :)
Michael
13th Jul 2015 2:50am
14th Jul 2015 3:25am
I cannot specify a line I like most; I loved the feeling from this piece. Rocking it PS x
14th Jul 2015 4:26am
I spilled it all here
Glad This entry was well received
One of my personal favs
xxo
Glad This entry was well received
One of my personal favs
xxo
19th Jan 2018 4:05am
A very nice piece. I don't know who would ever treat you this way, but they will be sorry. Excellent work here and keep it up!!
19th Jan 2018 12:20pm
Thanks es
This is one of my favorite love wrath poems
We went through a bad period but are good friends now. The power of redemption .....
Thx for your comment, appreciate it
This is one of my favorite love wrath poems
We went through a bad period but are good friends now. The power of redemption .....
Thx for your comment, appreciate it
23rd Jan 2018 3:04am
Hello sir, I'm stopping by to wish you all the best in the current competition in which you've entered this fine ode of the heart. ~~Jade
23rd Jan 2018 4:23am
Thank you Jade
I think of my 1000+ poems, it's in the the top 5 of my personal honesty writes
I so appreciate the read and comment ......
X
I think of my 1000+ poems, it's in the the top 5 of my personal honesty writes
I so appreciate the read and comment ......
X
23rd Jan 2018 9:24am
10th Mar 2023 1:08am
Hm. Ending with prostitution and linking back to my two-dollar whore.
What the fuck are you trying to say?
Huh?
Anyhoo, this had just the right amount of cyanide and cynicism to show real pain, and I dig that shit. With a spoon.
Like.
10th Mar 2023 1:18am
Yeah, muse of 6 years. Those relationships have a shelf life. She had the audacity to have life struggles and try to blame me.
I call those relationships vapor. It's years later though and we are on decent terms.
Women love me. I actually listen to them.
Whata concept.
Dig the analysis...
Like mucho
I call those relationships vapor. It's years later though and we are on decent terms.
Women love me. I actually listen to them.
Whata concept.
Dig the analysis...
Like mucho
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6th May 2023 4:18pm
Not ones' usual response to a break-up
but the onset created the feel
and in the end
created the real
end.
thank You for entering my comp
but the onset created the feel
and in the end
created the real
end.
thank You for entering my comp
6th May 2023 4:48pm
It was a dramatic ending to an intense relationship.
Years later she wanted to get back together but I knew that would be a crash and burn ..,
Thanks for your comment and for hosting your comp !!
Years later she wanted to get back together but I knew that would be a crash and burn ..,
Thanks for your comment and for hosting your comp !!
