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trail of wander
path beckons gentle
whisper enticing softly
girl alone follows
girl, every sadness carries
path flowers edge
trail meander, curling
sunlight fade, darken
flowers to weeds
trees mighty, branches reaching
fingers wooden crooked
branches clutching almost
eyes wide, owl
who, girl, who
girl tremble, hurry
river droplets bubble
river of tears
tears silver, sparkle
river flows, ever far
dome of sky, garnet
darkness, descend, encroach
clouds billow, looming
thunder roaring thunder
quaking ground, girl shaking
rush, falter, stumble
girl fallen, knees
cry, shudder, cry
she hugging she
shadows, hideous, torment
thunder trees terror
branches fingers reaching
drum of no drum
beating heart beating
girl supine, curled furless
scream, silent, echo
sleep. endless sleep
journey of your eyes
(remember
always)
Published 5th Jul 2015
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5th Jul 2015 9:43pm
"eyes wide, owl
who, girl, who
girl tremble, hurry"
~great emotion on read.
Enjoyed the flavored cascade of vulnerability.
This is gorgeous by layer, sirJ!
be well,
~d
Anonymous
5th Jul 2015 10:32pm
*shudder*...oh, the wander alone in darkness...
5th Jul 2015 10:44pm
6th Jul 2015 4:10am
Enrapturing tempo! The slow rise to thunderous apex of grandeur emotions to the ebbing end. This storm is overwhelming. Yet, the calm is captured in the end. It's different than your norm. Nicely inked! - blue angel
6th Jul 2015 4:27am
7th Jul 2015 6:22pm
8th Jul 2015 7:24am
"eyes wide, owl
who, girl, who
girl tremble, hurry"
^^^^^^
i really loved this change of pace from you [is there anything you don't do really well?]
your darker[er] wanderings/wonderings evoke such sweet melancholy
who, girl, who
girl tremble, hurry"
^^^^^^
i really loved this change of pace from you [is there anything you don't do really well?]
your darker[er] wanderings/wonderings evoke such sweet melancholy
10th Feb 2017 5:45pm
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