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Watching Us
my spirit is floating from my soul
I see us laying there in each other's arms
with all our physical being we are touching
legs intertwined with one another
we lay breasts to chest as our hearts hug
lips meet as our souls kiss
feel the prescience of Angels
they gather with me to look upon our luv
so beautiful we are together
I can still hear the flowing river
such a beautiful calming sound
a misty rain falling on our skin
gift from heaven of soft sweet kisses
we rise on our feet
gazing upon our nakedness
we begin to dance silently to a romantic rhythm
between the river and Angelic voices
oh how heavenly my sweet luv
as I watch us sharing luv so peacefully
tears begin to flow with rain down my cheek
you smile so sweetly
wipe them away with your finger ever so tender
then wipe my tears upon my lips
I wipe rain off your cheek and wipe your lips
then we enjoy the most sweetest kiss
as we taste each other's pure passion
my spirit floats back to myself
opened my eyes as I realize it was just a dream
but realizing it might not have been
cause here you are luving me
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All Rights Reserved
I see us laying there in each other's arms
with all our physical being we are touching
legs intertwined with one another
we lay breasts to chest as our hearts hug
lips meet as our souls kiss
feel the prescience of Angels
they gather with me to look upon our luv
so beautiful we are together
I can still hear the flowing river
such a beautiful calming sound
a misty rain falling on our skin
gift from heaven of soft sweet kisses
we rise on our feet
gazing upon our nakedness
we begin to dance silently to a romantic rhythm
between the river and Angelic voices
oh how heavenly my sweet luv
as I watch us sharing luv so peacefully
tears begin to flow with rain down my cheek
you smile so sweetly
wipe them away with your finger ever so tender
then wipe my tears upon my lips
I wipe rain off your cheek and wipe your lips
then we enjoy the most sweetest kiss
as we taste each other's pure passion
my spirit floats back to myself
opened my eyes as I realize it was just a dream
but realizing it might not have been
cause here you are luving me
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All Rights Reserved
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re: Watching Us
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2015 6:44am
Aww, Miss Flower, only you can paint such monogamous perfection...Enjoyed every kiss...xoxo, Devlin:)

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re: Re: Watching Us
2nd Jul 2015 6:55pm
Hey Dev......precious friend you always lift my lips to smile.....glad you felt the kisses....they are ever so sweet.....MAWH!! xo :)
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re: Re: Watching Us
2nd Jul 2015 6:58pm
Sweet S......you always bring a swelled smile to my face and heart.....thank you for always saying uplifting words.....appreciate you much.....luv and hugs xo :)
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2nd Jul 2015 7:52am
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2nd Jul 2015 7:00pm
Hey Glen...luving your "WOW"......thanks for dropping by and sharing a cloud xo :)
Re: Watching Us
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2015 8:12pm
ummm lots of warm feelings throughout. The words paint such soft scenes of love, who would not want to be on the receiving end of that kiss? lovely write

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re: Re: Watching Us
Awe SG.....so happy you like this one.....you make me blush and smile.....thank you for your soft words....luv and hugs .xo :)
Re: Watching Us
2nd Jul 2015 8:42pm
Wonderful work Flower. I'm glad it was more than a dream. You have a very special form of spirituality, containing a high level of emotion, passion and a love for both human and natural elements. You always put me in a better mood.
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re: Re: Watching Us
3rd Jul 2015 9:05pm
Hi Crow.....let you in on something......when I write I'm not really me.....it's like I feel different in a physical sense.....like my mind is in a trance type state......can't really explain it.....I just feel different. I'm so happy that I can bring a smile to you.....can turn your mood around.....you always make me feel glad I still write.....thank you!! Luv and hugs xo :)
Re: Watching Us
2nd Jul 2015 9:29pm
Beautiful write, I tells you!!!
With only a color you could make a rainbow painting with words
#BrrrrrHhhhhh
With only a color you could make a rainbow painting with words
#BrrrrrHhhhhh
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re: Re: Watching Us
3rd Jul 2015 9:09pm
Hey You!!! How ya been....good to see ya......you always bring a smile on my page and heart.....thank you for your beautiful words.....xo :)
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5th Jul 2015 4:16pm
ThenxLoads FlowerGirl
I been kay.... Just took a while off.
Yeah, you welcome... Your writes are always inspirational to read.
I been kay.... Just took a while off.
Yeah, you welcome... Your writes are always inspirational to read.
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5th Jul 2015 10:53pm
Re: Watching Us
3rd Jul 2015 10:39am
You have such a way with words. You have won me over completely, body and soul.
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re: Re: Watching Us
3rd Jul 2015 9:15pm
Awe.....I'm so happy this has touched you in a special way......honored by the RL add on.....thank you very much for your kind words.....xo :)
Re: Watching Us
4th Jul 2015 00:53am
a beautiful work of art in words... i enjoyed it begining to end... thx for sharing your ink
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re: Re: Watching Us
4th Jul 2015 7:43pm
Hey Magic.....I'm so glad you stopped by my way......thank you for your very kind words......glad you enjoyed xo :)
Re. Watching Us
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 3:33am
dream, but not a dream. Nice work if you can get it.

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Re: Re. Watching Us
4th Aug 2015 4:41am
Sorry that you didn't like this one.....just my strange imagination at work...thanks for leaving a comment anyway.....xo :)
Re: Re. Watching Us
25th Oct 2016 3:37am
Hi Wrangler.......thank you for visiting my page......nature is very inspiratinal and amazing that's for sure......purple smiles & hugs xo :)