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Feigned Saint
Prone I lay
a'weeping.
Stiff I'll stay
a'keeping.
Pain and taint
my bodystain.
All at hands
one surgeon..
feigned Saint!
Prefixed to mend
every skin line,
blatant un-bend-
le'me cry awhile..
Never was lifespan
a bonafide..
A'weeping in keeping
-never justified-
Back to basics
I shed off old skin.
Desires, aplenty
prey upon mend.
Every Lifestone of year-
total sum of all good.
I burn to disappear..
this missing? none should.
Scraping recollection-
I tamp down despair.
Craved on affection
lands me empty nowhere.
Jinxed to a pin point
a speck minus sublime.
Tears spill ever swift
in limerick'd cry..
Published 26th Jun 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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26th Jun 2015 10:21pm
Wow, that's deep. That first stanza bleeds with agony.
An intriguing and agony ridden write, put most beautifully. Pain into beauty.
Best whishes my fellow poet.
An intriguing and agony ridden write, put most beautifully. Pain into beauty.
Best whishes my fellow poet.
27th Jun 2015 9:01am
This emotional bleeder thanx you much fer
reading misterz..
Any beauty wrought on pain seems to just flow & groove.. (even on oops!) *g
smiles on you fer ur lovely comment!
curtsies ur way, & take care ;)
~d
reading misterz..
Any beauty wrought on pain seems to just flow & groove.. (even on oops!) *g
smiles on you fer ur lovely comment!
curtsies ur way, & take care ;)
~d
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26th Jun 2015 11:13pm
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27th Jun 2015 9:09am
Aww..huggs back m'sis!.. seems we can't have shite
w/o grief, world-suk & "saints"(sed in dark spat)
Luvzu ever fer catchin tears, Sweet Taryn!
(I hear it's best luk bein graced by Queen of Faerie)
*squeezes & grins fer lifting my funked moods ;)
mwahs~d
w/o grief, world-suk & "saints"(sed in dark spat)
Luvzu ever fer catchin tears, Sweet Taryn!
(I hear it's best luk bein graced by Queen of Faerie)
*squeezes & grins fer lifting my funked moods ;)
mwahs~d
26th Jun 2015 11:48pm
27th Jun 2015 9:14am
A new reader to my page, you have my warm thanx!
Always appreciate havin you here, and you bring
feedback- ty-ty. (get grins there)
be-well to you!
~d
Always appreciate havin you here, and you bring
feedback- ty-ty. (get grins there)
be-well to you!
~d
27th Jun 2015 7:58am
27th Jun 2015 9:18am
Hey you! ..gotsa thanku fer reading m'dear,
got the woe out today & start again tmrw..
(w/minimal grzz) lol
smiles fer brightenin' my page misterz!
~d
got the woe out today & start again tmrw..
(w/minimal grzz) lol
smiles fer brightenin' my page misterz!
~d
29th Jun 2015 8:27am
27th Jun 2015 9:12am
27th Jun 2015 9:20am
Much luv to you sweet poetess, your presence here
means SO much..always!
keep shinin' purdy one ;)
~d
means SO much..always!
keep shinin' purdy one ;)
~d
27th Jun 2015 4:53pm
the title makes me think of retards in tin foil pretending to be knights in shining armour
ltm
too often too often trying to lure one from ivory towers
how gorgeous your tears refract your inner light here, dear sighs xo
ltm
too often too often trying to lure one from ivory towers
how gorgeous your tears refract your inner light here, dear sighs xo
29th Jun 2015 4:32pm
ha & haaa's to ur paint of color 'tard, gawds u
slay me wif that beautiful 'jade of mind' uz be
packin..(heavy)
suks to all humans who claim capacity to heal..
and grrs that I even giv'a twiddle bout em. *sighs
heres ta healin aura on us both, my luvly souly-sis, cud not do without you ya'know? (yes. ..good.)
my snitty turns smiles on you, luv ;)
~d
slay me wif that beautiful 'jade of mind' uz be
packin..(heavy)
suks to all humans who claim capacity to heal..
and grrs that I even giv'a twiddle bout em. *sighs
heres ta healin aura on us both, my luvly souly-sis, cud not do without you ya'know? (yes. ..good.)
my snitty turns smiles on you, luv ;)
~d
I am still a'peeved that this one snuck past me,
you know I try not'ta givitt power..a'grrz
my always love, fer those perfect, tender hands.
*licks ..no punchin *today, baby. smirks.
~T
you know I try not'ta givitt power..a'grrz
my always love, fer those perfect, tender hands.
*licks ..no punchin *today, baby. smirks.
~T
