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Distance Within a Man's Heart ( dedicated to Savaja )
I was touched by your words
How well you chisled into my granite mind
You were gentle though, careful to probe, not offend
For that I thank you, because you care
I'm thinking about this entry as I construct
Instead of my usual conceive, write and burn
Finding reasons to believe in my craft
It's easy to fall in love with words but still fail
You've given me reasons to believe in myself
Stay humble but take some street cred
Dancing between emotion, desire and hunger
The gap closing, seeing the finish line, in the lead
How well you chisled into my granite mind
You were gentle though, careful to probe, not offend
For that I thank you, because you care
I'm thinking about this entry as I construct
Instead of my usual conceive, write and burn
Finding reasons to believe in my craft
It's easy to fall in love with words but still fail
You've given me reasons to believe in myself
Stay humble but take some street cred
Dancing between emotion, desire and hunger
The gap closing, seeing the finish line, in the lead
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