I need you

Oh WOW _ S!

Absolutely beautifully written this. I haven't listened to the vid. I think this is writen so tenderly, I'd be scared the movie doesn't move the same way as the book.

The repetition "I need you" hits home how dearly your narrator needs her person. Nicely done!

I am fond of how the needs are not just mush but real life grit... Hardens it just enough.

Thank you for writing this for me to read.

Kindness and Love

Al

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Thank you, Al, luv ~ :-*

You've hit the nail on the head with those needs being real. They're mine, all mine, and I wrote this in the wee hours last night. :-*

Thank you very much, luv, for your kind comments. I am, of course, curious as to what you'd think of the "vid", however, luv, I respect your decision. :-*

i'm reminded here of lyrics from a favourite song...
Hold me now I need to feel relief
Like I never wanted anything"
[seether ~ the gift]
... it feels as though one hug would fill a lifetime's worth of longing [&] hurt
*
you artfully dispell the myth of vulnerability being a weakness, wearing its gossamer shades with grace & such a fragile beauty that i could weep for you, with you...
"I need you
to let me curl up in you
to hold me and kiss me
so tenderly "
... lord, if he doesn't, i may just to do so for him
*
sheer beauty, sheer need, tres you, savaja
simply loved this sweet feminine plea  
~katja
xo

Thank you very much, katja, luv. :-*

I will have to find the song and listen as I am unfamiliar with it. Thank you for sharing it with me.

Thank you for seeing me in my need and vulnerability, luv, and I may yet need the companionable weeping and the holding as well... :-*

Je suis très pathétique, ne c'est pas? ;-p

The words are perfect but the narration is tremendous, whoa!

Thank you very much, slowgasm, luv. :-*

I am honored that you found grace in my written word and so much more so in my spoken word.

You are most kind to me. :-*

Soft and gentle but insistent of needs

well crafted with great flow

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Thank you very much, Granite, luv. :-*

I am honored you found this well crafted and the flow to your liking, luv. :-*

Thank you very, very, very much, REKS24, luv :-*.

You honor me greatly with your words and I am humbled, luv.

Great write and great Audio with great diction
even if it's gone through a synthetic change it's still
great
still you telling it how it is so thumbs up on this indeed.

Thank you very, very much, Rose, luv. :-*

Hmmm...by synthetic change, what do you mean, luv?

I will tell you what I do: I have a BlackBerry Q10 phone. I record my voice on the video (placing somewhat over the camera), then I upload that to YouTube. I make no changes for (and this is true pathos, I know :-p) I know not how to do so.

Tis why, sadly, one can hear things such as the air conditioner kicking on or off, birds betimes, papers rattling, all manner of things going on that I hope no one notices... ;-p

Ah well, c'est la vie...

Thank you, luv. :-*

Thank you, Taryn, luv ~ :-*

You are indeed accurate, I believe, along with katja, that there is strength in admitting vulnerability, weakness. Now, if I could but have what I need, betimes... ;-p Eh bien, je suis lasse.

D'accord, mon amie. :-* D'accord...

Thank you ever so much, Gabriel, luv. :-* You give me cause to blush with pleasure.
I am glad you found somewhat in them so pleasing to you, luv. ;-*

the need is always deep, so deep it must be satisfied agn & agn...

Ahhh, JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*

Indeed. ;-*

You are making *luvz to my heart with ur voice
m'dear..perfectly read!

you just cascade down the page.(yays me! got my audio bk on *finally)..was grred n will be goin bk to hear the one i commented on but didnt getta hear.

This is just gorgeous in thought & vocalizing
as only you can.. 'gives those warm tingles
of a solace seeking tigress almost, relinquishing the burdens & all else, but just for a bit.
greatness enjoyed, be well
~d

straight to my bones on this one. i get it. one thousand percent. well done!

Love the vulnerability and sensuality in this Savaja...

To admit how much you need someone is not always easy to some ; )

Brava!

this was done so well. The need, the love, the sensuality... so vulnerable and beautiful. I love this. Thank you for this beautiful write

Wow... With that seductive n tender voice
urging comfort on I'd like to turn this around n say...
I need you!! lol... Seriously beautiful ink n narration my dear :)

Simply breathtaking...
Your voice
Capturing your true emotion
Vulnerability perhaps as well..
Savaja, Your plea sends shivers to me you wrote this so good..

Amazing, this grasped every particle of my emotional realm. No words because that's how much and deep your voice spoke unto. Oh these tears are trying to flee from me eyes. Beautiful heaviness.

beautiful read of a beautiful
write....

wish there was some One talking to 'me'
      that way....Ha!

PS: you have way too many fans...I get dizzy scrolling so much to find a space to leave my adorations