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Re: Dandelion seeds
2nd Jun 2015 11:48pm
Re: Dandelion seeds
15th Jul 2015 7:38pm
Re: Dandelion seeds
2nd Jun 2015 11:57pm
Re: Dandelion seeds
15th Jul 2015 7:40pm
That is indeed a lovely thought regarding dandelions. Sending wishes with the seeds ... Wonderful!
Re: Dandelion seeds
3rd Jun 2015 00:27am
Re: Dandelion seeds
15th Jul 2015 7:42pm
Re: Dandelion seeds
15th Jul 2015 8:45pm
I like what Abraham Lincoln said:
"The best way to destroy an enemy is to make him a friend."
"The best way to destroy an enemy is to make him a friend."
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Re: Dandelion seeds
16th Jul 2015 9:01pm
Exactly. So wise! Tomorrow I'll bring flowers to those who are on bad terms with me. I'll be poor afterwards :-)! Thanks for the comment, by the way!
Re: Dandelion seeds
3rd Jun 2015 2:03am
Ahhh, Chiyo, luv ~ :-*
This, now this, this is quite, quite extraordinary.
I am riveted here, stopping my writing of this comment to read and re-read, struck once again by your quiet yet sage profundity here.
The unassuming simple yet opaque then ethereal ornate sun splendor that will, oh yes, take over what is now no-man's-land turning it into somewhat quite, quite other than that, verdant, fertile, bursting with vibrant, near-impossible to stamp out, life. Magnificent! :-*
Mayhap, I've read too much of my need into this, luv. If I have, please forgive me...
I Have rather missed you greatly, Chiyo, luv. :-* Regardless of my possible interpretation issues, you write a poem full of splendor!
This, now this, this is quite, quite extraordinary.
I am riveted here, stopping my writing of this comment to read and re-read, struck once again by your quiet yet sage profundity here.
The unassuming simple yet opaque then ethereal ornate sun splendor that will, oh yes, take over what is now no-man's-land turning it into somewhat quite, quite other than that, verdant, fertile, bursting with vibrant, near-impossible to stamp out, life. Magnificent! :-*
Mayhap, I've read too much of my need into this, luv. If I have, please forgive me...
I Have rather missed you greatly, Chiyo, luv. :-* Regardless of my possible interpretation issues, you write a poem full of splendor!
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Re: Dandelion seeds
15th Jul 2015 7:56pm
Dear Savaja, you make me blush and I am moved by your so sweet and profound comment on this little piece of poetry. There's nothing to forgive, dear! I'm honored that it touched you a bit!Your answer really pulls at my heartstrings...
Haven't been here for some time, yes. Missed you and DU and all of you but was lost in - I don't know - in everyday routine which means too much work and little spare time. Too little to even think about poetry let alone write poetry.
Thanks again for lovely words, Savaja!
Haven't been here for some time, yes. Missed you and DU and all of you but was lost in - I don't know - in everyday routine which means too much work and little spare time. Too little to even think about poetry let alone write poetry.
Thanks again for lovely words, Savaja!
Re: Dandelion seeds
3rd Jun 2015 2:58am
these are the things we can't hold on to. you're a passionate heart, Chi...
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Re: Dandelion seeds
It's no good to be a passionate heart, I'm afraid, John. It requires protective fences.
I'm glad you like the haiku :-).
I'm glad you like the haiku :-).
Re: Dandelion seeds
If wishes were kisses...and seeds of promise, too much to hope for perhaps...just beautiful Iris ox
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JeJe, so good to read you. Thank you for commenting :-). Seeds of promise - that's promising, isn't it? xoxo
Re: Dandelion seeds
4th Jun 2015 6:13am
Re: Dandelion seeds
15th Jul 2015 8:10pm
Fields of blooming dandelions, xmar82. The wind and the wishes are grandmasters of creating new life. At least in the case of dandelion seeds :-).
Re. Dandelion seeds
Anonymous
6th Aug 2015 11:15am
I have finally found a name for my place: no-man's-land!
Charming piece :)
Charming piece :)
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Re: Re. Dandelion seeds
25th Aug 2015 4:33pm
Thanks a lot, Derrick! Glad you found a name for your place :-)
although it's not always necessary to name the place we indwell
since hopefully that place is in our own heart :-).
although it's not always necessary to name the place we indwell
since hopefully that place is in our own heart :-).
Re. Dandelion seeds
24th Aug 2015 8:20pm
Re: Re. Dandelion seeds
25th Aug 2015 4:36pm
Nature revolves and so does man ... At least I'd like to think that way.
Thank you, JAZZ for your always insightful comments!
Thank you, JAZZ for your always insightful comments!