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Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
Anonymous
25th Aug 2015 5:57pm
Miss Chi,
So much said in the staying and the parting, in so few words. Enjoyed!!!
tornado
So much said in the staying and the parting, in so few words. Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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Re: Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
25th Aug 2015 6:12pm
Let's not mention the inbetween :-).
Thanks, dear tornado, for your kind comment! Glad you enjoyed!
Thanks, dear tornado, for your kind comment! Glad you enjoyed!
Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
25th Aug 2015 7:11pm
Re: Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
25th Aug 2015 7:32pm
And I love your comment, Paul.
Let's get back to your poems which I much adore and much missed..
Long time no see.
Let's get back to your poems which I much adore and much missed..
Long time no see.
Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
Re: Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
25th Aug 2015 7:35pm
Those afternoons are the extra something :-).
Thanks, Gahddess_Worship! Switching to your poems right now :-).
Thanks, Gahddess_Worship! Switching to your poems right now :-).
Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
25th Aug 2015 8:21pm
To parody the line from the Starland Vocal Band song: End of afternoon delight!
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Re: Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
Oh, that would have made a fantastic middle line :-)!
Thanks Solomon for giving that little piece so much thought :-).
Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
25th Aug 2015 9:44pm
Re: Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
25th Aug 2015 9:48pm
And we'll never give them back, not in a million years :-).
Thanks, Speak! How are you doing!
Thanks, Speak! How are you doing!
Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
26th Aug 2015 00:04am
A moment in time to be treasured in my opinion... Short but very sweetly presented :)
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Re: Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
27th Aug 2015 7:48am
You felt my haiku and the stolen moments. Thanks a lot for your sweet comment!
Love to see you again here on DU, Poe!
Love to see you again here on DU, Poe!
Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
26th Aug 2015 3:55am
Re: Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
27th Aug 2015 7:50am
You're last sentence, somehow typical for you. You're adding eroticism to my haiku :-). Thanks, John, appreciate it and you!
Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
Anonymous
26th Aug 2015 3:30pm
What a way to capture the whole day with just that one promise of the first kiss in the beginning of the day.
Welcome back Ms. Chi :)
Welcome back Ms. Chi :)
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Re: Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
27th Aug 2015 7:52am
Glad about your warm welcome, Vee! Thank you!
Well, he kissed her in the afternoon ... :-)
Well, he kissed her in the afternoon ... :-)
Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
26th Aug 2015 3:56pm
Re: Re. 俳句 Stolen afternoon
27th Aug 2015 7:54am
Thank you, Ishmael (Call me Ishmael [...])! Glad you like the poem!
I hardly write more than 17 syllables at a time. I'm lazy :-).
I hardly write more than 17 syllables at a time. I'm lazy :-).