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Truth of addiction
In this life
- I've hurt all & myself
In this life
- My strive was only to feed my habits health
In my life
- I have cried myself to sleep
In my life
- My mistakes I do repeat
In my life
- It's been a bitter battle to the end
In my life
- I lived a life of pretend
In my life
- I lived a life of sin
Cause in my life
- I pushed the needle in.
- I've hurt all & myself
In this life
- My strive was only to feed my habits health
In my life
- I have cried myself to sleep
In my life
- My mistakes I do repeat
In my life
- It's been a bitter battle to the end
In my life
- I lived a life of pretend
In my life
- I lived a life of sin
Cause in my life
- I pushed the needle in.
Published 2nd Jun 2015
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2015 00:41am
who says it's "sin"?..some book or your own heart and intuition?..great write though STR8...other than the guilt you give yourself in the end..just curious as to where that comes from..
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2015 00:44am
or to elaborate further, social conditioning of any kind..if that's where the guilt comes from it's CRAP..if it truly comes from deep within you if you take those things away, then you need to find a way to get right with yourself..but dead on and beautiful as to honesty of addiction up to that point...one could argue that 99.9 percent of people and it might be one hundred, were it not for possibly mythical profits, lived a life of pretend..
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2015 00:44am
sorry..prophets
6th Jun 2015 1:53am
