Gin Joint

Looks like the beginning of a beautiful friendship. Pour me another one Ahavati.  

Ahhh, Ahavati, luv ~ :-*

You are brilliant, simply brilliant! Maravilloso! Intertwining, effortlessly, breathtaking eroticism with this deep sense of poignance in concise, pared ecstasy.

You keep taking my breath away, luv. I can barely gasp out my bliss... ;-*

he ain't stickin' his neck out for nobody...okay, maybe her.

noir haiku, a new jewel in your crown...

sweet shorty,


but.....be wary of being 'too derivative'...
         (keep creativity from getting
                  lazy)

take a bow, lady... this was darn perfect

I can hear Bogart crooning this....wonderful

yesssss....perfection.  love the movie.

And the piano begs the moon never to leave. (I imagine).  Impeccable terse-verse  Thank you.

Blessings, Silence