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Canvas
I am your living canvas,
watching…panting
As you paint me breathless…
Stroking stimulation,
never ending…ever building
Dabbing scarlet-hues ‘cross my horizon…
With anticipation vivid,
soaring high to combustion
Of Rainbows
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Re: Canvas
Anonymous
31st May 2015 5:31am
darksighs,
Now that's how a brush should be handled!
Loved you line:
"Dabbing scarlet-hues ‘cross my horizon… "
tornado
Now that's how a brush should be handled!
Loved you line:
"Dabbing scarlet-hues ‘cross my horizon… "
tornado
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re: Re: Canvas
31st May 2015 6:30pm
Re: Canvas
31st May 2015 5:49am
"I am your living canvas,
watching…panting
As you paint me breathless…
Stroking stimulation,
never ending…ever building
Dabbing scarlet-hues ‘cross my horizon…
With anticipation vivid,
soaring high to combustion
Of Rainbows"
That s one beautiful canvas, am liking the feel of .. it's hair raising with opening pores,
watching…panting
As you paint me breathless…
Stroking stimulation,
never ending…ever building
Dabbing scarlet-hues ‘cross my horizon…
With anticipation vivid,
soaring high to combustion
Of Rainbows"
That s one beautiful canvas, am liking the feel of .. it's hair raising with opening pores,
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re: Re: Canvas
31st May 2015 6:54pm
I love the way a kitties fur does that hair twitching movement when barely touched.
You spark the same adorable image. ty's
luvs, dear
~d
You spark the same adorable image. ty's
luvs, dear
~d
Re: Canvas
31st May 2015 11:21am
Your writing reminds me so much of mine in my early Poetspeak days ...
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re: Re: Canvas
31st May 2015 7:03pm
ooohh..are you counting the ways?
had to post a nice older softy, to keep my
mind off things like..strangulation
(the bad kind.)
ruff day..thanks fer poppin in luv!
be good (ha!)
~d
had to post a nice older softy, to keep my
mind off things like..strangulation
(the bad kind.)
ruff day..thanks fer poppin in luv!
be good (ha!)
~d
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re: Re: Canvas
31st May 2015 7:49pm
Hi sweetie! Thankies for joinin' me
in innocent brushstroke..
Always a treat to have you here!
huggs
~d
in innocent brushstroke..
Always a treat to have you here!
huggs
~d
Re: Canvas
Now this is a theme I can identify with d-t
More, MORE, I want
MMooooooooooorrrrrrrrrRoaR!!!
Expose the pot of gold at the bottom of your Rainbow!
jj
More, MORE, I want
MMooooooooooorrrrrrrrrRoaR!!!
Expose the pot of gold at the bottom of your Rainbow!
jj
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re: Re: Canvas
31st May 2015 8:11pm
Since you are so hot in the asking I shall..get right on top of that..um..request ;)
Tahs! (as I have work to do it seems)
grins n huggs cutie
~d/t
Tahs! (as I have work to do it seems)
grins n huggs cutie
~d/t
Re: Canvas
A rainbow after the flood; Spirit connecting with the earth creating a quiet aura of reflection.
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re: Re: Canvas
31st May 2015 8:14pm
re: Re: Canvas
4th Jun 2015 1:48am
..I am in high heat lately.
Thanx always fer bein' you and bein' here!
over-warm
~d
Thanx always fer bein' you and bein' here!
over-warm
~d
Re: Canvas
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2015 2:34pm
"As you paint me breathless…
ah fuckit, i wish i'd thought of that line first! it's gorgeous, evokes so many images... is it a touch or a kiss or a whisper raising skin to the little bumps of desire's braille...
loved!!!
ah fuckit, i wish i'd thought of that line first! it's gorgeous, evokes so many images... is it a touch or a kiss or a whisper raising skin to the little bumps of desire's braille...
loved!!!
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re: Re: Canvas
3rd Jun 2015 3:20pm
lmao..too funny girl..you've watered my mouth with many lines for sure ;)
*Raising my pen to you.. luv-luv seein you here- throwing my page to fits of smile!
huggz
~d
*Raising my pen to you.. luv-luv seein you here- throwing my page to fits of smile!
huggz
~d
Re. Canvas
9th Oct 2015 8:09pm
Re. Canvas
Anonymous
8th Jun 2018 8:35pm
Bravo! Just simply magical
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