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Headspace
I need to get out of my head
Please take me out
I need to get out of my mental space
Please release me from these confines
I crave the relinquishment of control
I'm yours
I admit
I may have trouble with sass
I understand
You'll flay no matter my supplications, cries, gasps
I will yield
Completely
Open to your every whim
Hopelessly aroused
Silky musk streaking trembling thighs
If you do as I need
Feed me your hardness
Or softness
Your rivulets
Precum streaming
Pussy gleaming
I will orgasm for you
As I wring climax from you
All I need is you in my mouth...
Please take me out
I need to get out of my mental space
Please release me from these confines
I crave the relinquishment of control
I'm yours
I admit
I may have trouble with sass
I understand
You'll flay no matter my supplications, cries, gasps
I will yield
Completely
Open to your every whim
Hopelessly aroused
Silky musk streaking trembling thighs
If you do as I need
Feed me your hardness
Or softness
Your rivulets
Precum streaming
Pussy gleaming
I will orgasm for you
As I wring climax from you
All I need is you in my mouth...
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Re: Headspace
30th May 2015 8:11am
I'm yours
I admit ...I will orgasm for you
As I wring climax from you
All I need is you in my mouth... grt to feel
I admit ...I will orgasm for you
As I wring climax from you
All I need is you in my mouth... grt to feel
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re: Re: Headspace
1st Jun 2015 11:15pm
Ahhh, Tantric Acolyte, luv ~ :-*
Great to do... ;-*
I have rather missed you, luv... ;-*
Great to do... ;-*
I have rather missed you, luv... ;-*
Re: Headspace
30th May 2015 10:57am
Wow. This piece practically sizzles on the page. I think I may need to wipe steam off my screen! Very erotic and delightful to read.
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re: Re: Headspace
1st Jun 2015 11:29pm
Thank you very, very much, FindingZoe, luv. :-*
Are you quite certain that steam wasn't pre-existing, luv? I've read some of your work now and I'm fairly certain you've a lingering haze over there... ;-*
In fact, I daresay, there's probably jungle overgrowth occurring from the collective heat and moisture you're generating in that space of yours, eh? ;-*
Are you quite certain that steam wasn't pre-existing, luv? I've read some of your work now and I'm fairly certain you've a lingering haze over there... ;-*
In fact, I daresay, there's probably jungle overgrowth occurring from the collective heat and moisture you're generating in that space of yours, eh? ;-*
Re: Headspace
Savaja, your inate ability to reach the reader as if you're speaking personally to each one of us
never ceases to amaze me!
You are so well spoken it blows my mind!
Thank you for sharing gorgeous!
Love
Zazzles ox
never ceases to amaze me!
You are so well spoken it blows my mind!
Thank you for sharing gorgeous!
Love
Zazzles ox
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re: Re: Headspace
1st Jun 2015 11:43pm
Thank you ever so much, Zazzles, luv! :-*
I cannot even begin to adequately convey to you how grateful I am that you feel this way.
I have oft-times struggled with my speech to fit in; I was quite an odd child for I have always spoken thus and had an oddly expansive vocabulary, which led to various nicknames. :-p
I will undoubtedly be considered eccentric in my old age when that eventually comes, mayhap a tad crazy. Tis heartening to me to hear this from you, luv. :-*
Meh. I worry and struggle betimes, self-doubts the bane of writers everywhere I suppose... :-*
Thank YOU, luv. :-*
I cannot even begin to adequately convey to you how grateful I am that you feel this way.
I have oft-times struggled with my speech to fit in; I was quite an odd child for I have always spoken thus and had an oddly expansive vocabulary, which led to various nicknames. :-p
I will undoubtedly be considered eccentric in my old age when that eventually comes, mayhap a tad crazy. Tis heartening to me to hear this from you, luv. :-*
Meh. I worry and struggle betimes, self-doubts the bane of writers everywhere I suppose... :-*
Thank YOU, luv. :-*
re: re: Re: Headspace
2nd Jun 2015 00:54am
Re: Headspace
31st May 2015 1:15am
This took me out of my mind for a few minutes, for which I'm grateful. Got my juices flowing. This is eroticism with the personal touch.
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re: Re: Headspace
2nd Jun 2015 00:05am
Ahhh, crowfly, luv ~ :-*
I am glad I could aid you in getting out of your mind for some moments and cause your juices to percolate. ;-*
Thank you, luv, ever so much. :-*
I am glad I could aid you in getting out of your mind for some moments and cause your juices to percolate. ;-*
Thank you, luv, ever so much. :-*
Re: Headspace
31st May 2015 8:09am
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Ahhh, JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
I do ever endeavor to seduce thee... ;-*
Thank you, Sir. :-*
I do ever endeavor to seduce thee... ;-*
Thank you, Sir. :-*
Re: Headspace
"I admit
I may have trouble with sass." How many ways can I love this? :) Wonderful poem. :)
I may have trouble with sass." How many ways can I love this? :) Wonderful poem. :)
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re: Re: Headspace
16th Jun 2015 11:50am
Ahhh, Pishashee, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much for this. I love that you love my sassiness, chica. ;-*
Thank you very much for this. I love that you love my sassiness, chica. ;-*
Re: Headspace
4th Jun 2015 5:12pm
All I can manage to utter is..., I Cant even do that this was so deliciously tangible in my mind. .
Savaja.... lovely and I too will do the same
Savaja.... lovely and I too will do the same
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re: Re: Headspace
16th Jun 2015 11:53am
Ahhh, vivid_mocha, luv ~ :-*
You are so incredibly delectable, luv. ;-*
I so adore your passionate responses and your whole passionate self, luv. :-*
You are a such an exquisite gem, luv.
You are so incredibly delectable, luv. ;-*
I so adore your passionate responses and your whole passionate self, luv. :-*
You are a such an exquisite gem, luv.