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Dignity
Upon this pyre I wait
My sins burning from my flesh
They sizzle and sting
One last kiss before
Breaking their bonds to this flesh
The frankincense and myrrh
Choke and enrage the demons within
They crowd within my throat
Scratching and hissing to break free
They make me cough and sputter
To gasp for the sweet air of life
The dark entity that circles my altar
Shrills with anticipation
It clicks its teeth and claws
Eager to taste my skin
And I crowded yet alone
Endure to die with dignity
(C) 2015 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
My sins burning from my flesh
They sizzle and sting
One last kiss before
Breaking their bonds to this flesh
The frankincense and myrrh
Choke and enrage the demons within
They crowd within my throat
Scratching and hissing to break free
They make me cough and sputter
To gasp for the sweet air of life
The dark entity that circles my altar
Shrills with anticipation
It clicks its teeth and claws
Eager to taste my skin
And I crowded yet alone
Endure to die with dignity
(C) 2015 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
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Re: Dignity
Welcome home <3 I have been wondering about you...
I do hope your doing well, We miss you happy to see you back!
on to your poem,
This piece is so daring, so dark and full of terror I love it!!! What demons are you fighting ?
Surely you will win, you have a pure heart!!! While i enjoy the talent in this piece it make me worry about you.
I'm around if you need to talk :)
((((((((((((((((((Xmar))))))))))))))))))
love always
Jackie xoxoxox
I do hope your doing well, We miss you happy to see you back!
on to your poem,
This piece is so daring, so dark and full of terror I love it!!! What demons are you fighting ?
Surely you will win, you have a pure heart!!! While i enjoy the talent in this piece it make me worry about you.
I'm around if you need to talk :)
((((((((((((((((((Xmar))))))))))))))))))
love always
Jackie xoxoxox
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28th May 2015 7:06pm
Thank you Zazzles I'm happy to be back amongst this great group of poets. I've been struggling with an injury that's come back but I'm doing well thank you for asking. This is what this poem is all about. My injury and the demons it raises. Feels good to write dark poetry again.
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Anonymous
28th May 2015 3:46am
Hi X.....big hugs and smiling welcome back!! Very dark write for you.....never an end to your brilliant talent.....xo :)
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28th May 2015 7:23pm
Thank you flowergirl, I am happy to be back. Love your new pic. Darkness was brewing and I wanted to capture it on paper.
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Anonymous
30th May 2015 3:49am
Oh gosh.....you've made me blush.....thank you xo :)
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Re: Dignity
28th May 2015 6:02am
Ahhh, xmar82, luv ~ :-*
There is no one who can castigate and annihilate us so well as we can ourselves.
Remember to be kind to yourself, luv. Yes, even should you feel undeserving.
We are all human here and err... :-*
Tis wondrous to see you; I have rather missed you, luv. :-*
There is no one who can castigate and annihilate us so well as we can ourselves.
Remember to be kind to yourself, luv. Yes, even should you feel undeserving.
We are all human here and err... :-*
Tis wondrous to see you; I have rather missed you, luv. :-*
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28th May 2015 7:34pm
I have missed you all as well. Thank you and I am happy to be back. Hope you enjoyed this little dark poem of mine.
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28th May 2015 6:41am
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28th May 2015 7:36pm
I am glad to see you're still here MsRockyJAckson. I hope to read your material soon and thank you for dropping and enjoying the read.
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Lol what makes you think I wasn't still here? haha
Please do when you have the time, but till then keep up the good work xmar,
Glad you're back :)
Please do when you have the time, but till then keep up the good work xmar,
Glad you're back :)
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Re: Dignity
1st Jun 2015 1:56pm
you paint such a picture with these words xmas....
i felt i was there watching it all....
i think i've said it before but the heck i'll say it again...its great to read your words again...welcome back... xo :)
i felt i was there watching it all....
i think i've said it before but the heck i'll say it again...its great to read your words again...welcome back... xo :)
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4th Jun 2015 3:47am
When I started writing poetry my first poems were dark ones. Thank you for welcoming me back Kate.