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Mornings are important to the young poem. It struggles
after an extended adolescence. The format has to
be cleaned so it hardly has time to think of you. It needs strength,
bagels and caffeine for the messy tangle of words strewn about
like cheese doodles locked in battle position on the parlor floor.
It will unearth closets full of past, journaled experience
written on napkins and cigarette packs. It will want to stop
because its allergies are flaring. The flotsam and jetsam of the
trash is getting in the way of the verse. It becomes impatient
with the muse and contemplates whiskey and a smoke for lunch.
It desecrates cardboard tombs, discovers pieced travel
receipts suffocated between pages of cheap magazines, shallow
meanings leading the reader in rebellious circles of angst.
it remembers...; looks around sheepishly. Wonders if anyone
saw. It will be embarrassed. Angry. Migraine swelling.
It downs two Goody Powders with Jose Cuervo before slamming
incoherent syntax against the wall. Strangles bad metaphor
by the neck and slits one repetitious throat at a time. Raids the cellar;
drags juvenile cliché by bleached roots to the dumpster
before fixing dinner and banging the next generation of verse.
~
after an extended adolescence. The format has to
be cleaned so it hardly has time to think of you. It needs strength,
bagels and caffeine for the messy tangle of words strewn about
like cheese doodles locked in battle position on the parlor floor.
It will unearth closets full of past, journaled experience
written on napkins and cigarette packs. It will want to stop
because its allergies are flaring. The flotsam and jetsam of the
trash is getting in the way of the verse. It becomes impatient
with the muse and contemplates whiskey and a smoke for lunch.
It desecrates cardboard tombs, discovers pieced travel
receipts suffocated between pages of cheap magazines, shallow
meanings leading the reader in rebellious circles of angst.
it remembers...; looks around sheepishly. Wonders if anyone
saw. It will be embarrassed. Angry. Migraine swelling.
It downs two Goody Powders with Jose Cuervo before slamming
incoherent syntax against the wall. Strangles bad metaphor
by the neck and slits one repetitious throat at a time. Raids the cellar;
drags juvenile cliché by bleached roots to the dumpster
before fixing dinner and banging the next generation of verse.
~
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