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Jagged Edge
You penetrate
with jagged edge
of soul shard
And I am hungry
for the cut..
Your lengthy words
cradle despise,
soon the death of me.
Singe of heartstrings..
(a valiant attempt)
Still I sway-
~motionless~
to your sultry stage.
Dancing as an imp
of want-fevered passion,
I burn down resistance
in walls of defeat…
just to touch you
is
to touch me…
Published 21st May 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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22nd May 2015 6:14pm
Nice job here, lady
stark n vivid language envelopes a gooey centred love poetry. good stuff, keep shinnin'
stark n vivid language envelopes a gooey centred love poetry. good stuff, keep shinnin'
22nd May 2015 8:19pm
22nd May 2015 6:24pm
The mirrored image of self in another. Nothing more beautiful than that recognition. Another good write.
22nd May 2015 8:42pm
Hard work to keep the fog low-grade fer sure, yep-yep ;) *wipes... *wipes harder
G's
Thankx for seeing beauty here ;)
take care, you!
~d
G's
Thankx for seeing beauty here ;)
take care, you!
~d
