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puddle-sounds
Juices like wine,
gather at your tip..
swelled hot and jerking
for tight throat and lip.
Warmest of liquid,
hot skin at a bite..
I'm hungry for filling,
warm pool 'tween thighs.
Pin me down flat
and straddle my mouth,
feed me your length
slow, while I'm loud.
I sigh, in puddle-sounds.
You push into my resistance
and my stomach burns with full.
Eyes locked at bold intrusion,
my tongue sings fire in lull.
I swallow you in hard gulps
of my throaty reflex..
Drinking juices of your pleasure,
eyes burn in watery effect.
Just then, between
your thrust and spill..
Your thick fingers slip
past moist lace,
find me saturated eclipse-
in sunshine-scented beg.
Not gentle, you thumb my center
and pour me,,
onto your waiting palm.
Published 18th May 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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18th May 2015 1:39pm
19th May 2015 11:23pm
Hey there, belated good to that morning, glad you dropped in!
Sweet Thankx for the read ;)
~d
Sweet Thankx for the read ;)
~d
Anonymous
21st May 2015 9:49pm
darksighs,
enjoyed the erotic visuals of your write. Keep pouring ;-)
Welcome to DU!
tornado
enjoyed the erotic visuals of your write. Keep pouring ;-)
Welcome to DU!
tornado
22nd May 2015 00:22am
I am much obliged to do so! lol
Thanx fer readin' sweets!
smiles to you for the welcome!
;)
~d
Thanx fer readin' sweets!
smiles to you for the welcome!
;)
~d
22nd May 2015 9:07am
I can't say enough about your ability to make imagery come alive and reverberate with music in a sensual frenzy. Outstanding verse!!! jj
27th May 2015 4:54am
Funny you'd say music..In my head..(eeks! I know) that music teases on deep-drum, and a whispered-twang of guitar- in heavy reverb'..
My muse and I thank you, (as always) JJ!
;)
~d
My muse and I thank you, (as always) JJ!
;)
~d
Anonymous
27th May 2015 3:49am
Your written word is filled with fun and lust, your oral is not bad either. I like!
27th May 2015 5:01am
My naughty muse sends *hot-pant in thanx!
Raising oral havoc, she is! eg's
Appreciate the stop-in sweets!
be good ;)
~d
Raising oral havoc, she is! eg's
Appreciate the stop-in sweets!
be good ;)
~d
9th Sep 2015 3:31am
I feel like I want to pour me a tall glass of your juices. "Bottoms up" is the term? Yes. This was fucking hot I must say. And I am leaning next to a clothes dryer typing this, which is probably not a good idea.
