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Creed of Questions
Who am I to, write this creed?
I wonder what in it you seek?
What lesson you will learn?
Will you make or break the poor?
To be evil, is to be hated?
Why drugs are made and taken?
Why is their any form of life?
This creed was said to write itself,
Seeking desire, balance or pain,
From those parents, teachers or great masters,
You are rich with them, they need more to be with you,
The masses cry for blood, gore and fantasy,
In madness seeking answers from dogs,
Born to enjoy activities and habits.
Made from every skin, bone and memory,
Surely everything is made from games,
Freewill is a given, everything is subjectively permitted,
Reason born of reasoning in meaning,
All is seemly lost in translative reality,
Stars made of righteous noble, loving, cold fury,
There are many impossible riddles, creating somewhat new... beginnings.
The key to learning the forbidden, above is written.
--.. --- ... / -.- .. .- / -.-. ..- .-.. - ..- ...
Embedded onto electrical surges by Infernus,
Inspired greatly by the work of Beniah's;
Life - http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/204081-life/
Below is written, read a sentence from each stanza and understand...
I wonder what in it you seek?
What lesson you will learn?
Will you make or break the poor?
To be evil, is to be hated?
Why drugs are made and taken?
Why is their any form of life?
This creed was said to write itself,
Seeking desire, balance or pain,
From those parents, teachers or great masters,
You are rich with them, they need more to be with you,
The masses cry for blood, gore and fantasy,
In madness seeking answers from dogs,
Born to enjoy activities and habits.
Made from every skin, bone and memory,
Surely everything is made from games,
Freewill is a given, everything is subjectively permitted,
Reason born of reasoning in meaning,
All is seemly lost in translative reality,
Stars made of righteous noble, loving, cold fury,
There are many impossible riddles, creating somewhat new... beginnings.
The key to learning the forbidden, above is written.
--.. --- ... / -.- .. .- / -.-. ..- .-.. - ..- ...
Embedded onto electrical surges by Infernus,
Inspired greatly by the work of Beniah's;
Life - http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/204081-life/
Below is written, read a sentence from each stanza and understand...
Published 12th May 2015
| Edited 13th May 2015
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"The masses cry for blood, gore and fantasy." That's a strong line among several. In the first line you say "Who I'm I, to write this creed?" I think you mean "Who am I." Otherwise a fine job Infernus.
One of the first poems I read on deep underground was "Human Willing".
I feel like a child who has walked into the playground,
only to become friends with the most popular kid in school.
You are correct I did mean "Who am I."
I shall change that now.
I tend to edit the hell out of poems, which usually leads to a complete metamorphosis.
I see it this way; make one poem, get infinite more!
Now imagine what happens when I read poems that are not my own!
Yours faithfully Infernus.
I feel like a child who has walked into the playground,
only to become friends with the most popular kid in school.
You are correct I did mean "Who am I."
I shall change that now.
I tend to edit the hell out of poems, which usually leads to a complete metamorphosis.
I see it this way; make one poem, get infinite more!
Now imagine what happens when I read poems that are not my own!
Yours faithfully Infernus.
12th May 2015 8:44pm
A nice write on the key of the secrets. It is said that, to ask the question implies the answer is already known.
