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A Stranger I Know
Distance, an ache today.
Longing,
An invisible thing
Clamps onto the beat
In my chest, works harder
Caging it there
To suffer, to wait.
Pain in my head
As the pressure builds.
Words stuck in my throat
In my pen, instead
My eyes speak
The language, water flowing
Rolling down
All is pushed through them.
With one look,
You would understand.
I need to fold into
The safety of unconditional love.
Disappear under blanket hugs,
Fingers to delicately push
The hair behind my ears,
Brushing my cheek, comforting.
To hold a space for me,
Filter my pain
Let me tremble, to be reverent
Silent
Amidst the deafening force
Of these emotions,
Taking over me,
My body,
For this moment.
Longing,
An invisible thing
Clamps onto the beat
In my chest, works harder
Caging it there
To suffer, to wait.
Pain in my head
As the pressure builds.
Words stuck in my throat
In my pen, instead
My eyes speak
The language, water flowing
Rolling down
All is pushed through them.
With one look,
You would understand.
I need to fold into
The safety of unconditional love.
Disappear under blanket hugs,
Fingers to delicately push
The hair behind my ears,
Brushing my cheek, comforting.
To hold a space for me,
Filter my pain
Let me tremble, to be reverent
Silent
Amidst the deafening force
Of these emotions,
Taking over me,
My body,
For this moment.
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Re: A Stranger I Know
10th May 2015 1:19am
re: Re: A Stranger I Know
10th May 2015 5:52am
I'm surprised it came off as sensual, but hey, even I don't know what's happening in my writing until it's out.
Thanks Mr.P
Thanks Mr.P
re: re: Re: A Stranger I Know
10th May 2015 11:22am
The 3rd stanza has a quiet sensual feel to it, I love the delicate feeling in this poem ...
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Re: A Stranger I Know
10th May 2015 3:52am
I gather "A Stranger I Know" is a self-portrait, and it's fine one. Your definition of "longing" in the first stanza is chilling. Then there's pressure building in your head then flowing through your pen in the second. Then your quest for unconditional love, which is a tough prospect, then the plea to "hold a space for me." This resonates, Lookie. Excellent work!
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10th May 2015 5:53am
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re: Re: A Stranger I Know
10th May 2015 5:55am
Thank you Taryn. It was a solemn day for me, but I'm much better now! We all have days like this.
Re: A Stranger I Know
10th May 2015 5:11am
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10th May 2015 5:57am
Re: A Stranger I Know
10th May 2015 8:16am
Oh my, DUP is full of these poems of longing tonight! Breaking my heart!
Fingers to delicately push
The hair behind my ears,
Brushing my cheek, comforting.
Yes! Loo, I feel your emptiness. Such a beautiful poem.
Fingers to delicately push
The hair behind my ears,
Brushing my cheek, comforting.
Yes! Loo, I feel your emptiness. Such a beautiful poem.
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re: Re: A Stranger I Know
10th May 2015 4:05pm
Thanks for getting it Ms.Petal. For all the ways that life can make you 'busy', this is the one thing I needed, at that moment. Much better now that I got it out! Thanks to DU ;)
Re: A Stranger I Know
Anonymous
19th May 2015 5:22pm
A little late to respond, been traveling. Glad to hear this was a mood, but pray for you to find someone to share that beautiful heart with!

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19th May 2015 6:06pm