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Battle Rages Within
Erotic thoughts fill my head
Stream out through my fingers
Onto the pure white page
Beautiful words? Or, inappropriate lurid stains?
Is it wrong to find another female form alluring?
Are not the sensual curves just as beautiful?
The pleasure of consummated love as powerful?
Have I no concept of propriety and self control?
Is my true self awakened?
As Smeagol cum Gollum
I am racked with the pain of duplicity
Seemingly destined to destroy what is precious
The incessant battle rages on
In another context
She labels me a “sick son of a bitch”
Words that tear at my soul
One part cruel condemnation of a saintly mother
The other truth
Simple surrender is the answer
Fighting for both sides becomes impossible
A sacrifice must be made
The “who am I?” question answered
Stream out through my fingers
Onto the pure white page
Beautiful words? Or, inappropriate lurid stains?
Is it wrong to find another female form alluring?
Are not the sensual curves just as beautiful?
The pleasure of consummated love as powerful?
Have I no concept of propriety and self control?
Is my true self awakened?
As Smeagol cum Gollum
I am racked with the pain of duplicity
Seemingly destined to destroy what is precious
The incessant battle rages on
In another context
She labels me a “sick son of a bitch”
Words that tear at my soul
One part cruel condemnation of a saintly mother
The other truth
Simple surrender is the answer
Fighting for both sides becomes impossible
A sacrifice must be made
The “who am I?” question answered
Published 6th May 2015
| Edited 17th May 2023
Author's Note
Duplicity is hard to sustain. Either one side wins or you are completely torn asunder.
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Anonymous
6th May 2015 9:29pm
hi sick son of a bitch, i'm a sick puppy... wanna make me bark [?]
i jest of course, but you get the gist...
... taboo or depraved, it's all subjective... to hell with those who chose to use shame as a tool for modification of behaviour
write darling, write write write xo
i jest of course, but you get the gist...
... taboo or depraved, it's all subjective... to hell with those who chose to use shame as a tool for modification of behaviour
write darling, write write write xo
6th May 2015 10:09pm
It's statements like yours that encourage me to write and to write with more vulnerable authenticity...thank you Katja...howza abouta bone you can bury LOL!
Anonymous
7th May 2015 6:25am
cher, i say it because i adore your erotic pieces. both you and Mister Feddeler are two of my favourite gentlemen poets here specifically for the way you appreciate not only the female form but the psyche too
sounds fantastic. i'll bring my collar and leash... you can take me for walkies after
sounds fantastic. i'll bring my collar and leash... you can take me for walkies after
6th May 2015 10:29pm
Hello Dear... yes u have a wicked pallet,
and some might enjoy the commonality u speak of,
write about and struggle with..
I too roll on the dark and unholy side!
loved this !!!!
in the list...
Zazzels xoxox
and some might enjoy the commonality u speak of,
write about and struggle with..
I too roll on the dark and unholy side!
loved this !!!!
in the list...
Zazzels xoxox
Thank you Zazzle! I prefer to see it as the sensuous, natural side :) My problem is I try roll along a very narrow fence.
6th May 2015 10:43pm
Yes well i find the female body gorgeous too
I love men but woman are sexy to look at without a doubt!!!
okay im 1% bi , hehehe
Great feeling here!
write on!
Zazzles xoxox
I love men but woman are sexy to look at without a doubt!!!
okay im 1% bi , hehehe
Great feeling here!
write on!
Zazzles xoxox
6th May 2015 10:55pm
7th May 2015 00:05am
I too find the female body divine. No battle involved. I'm a pushover. But seriously, there's nothing sick about this, and it's those making such claims that are sick in the head. And maybe the bed. Beautiful, Gahdess!
7th May 2015 00:27am
Anonymous
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18th May 2023 2:55am
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18th May 2023 3:58am
Thank you so much, Brandy❣ I am thrilled that you like this piece. It's so nice to be understood. I think everyone should write...it's such beautiful, cleansing therapy.
