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Briefly Lovers
Many years ago
A liaison of soul clinching
Connecting with the already connected
Wrong and right but ultimately wrong
Fast forward
Light years
Oddly we became friends again
Not sustainable though, just because
Lovers have a way of seeing
Joined at the hip, star gazing
The indelible memories linger
Of a hot flame that once was ...
A liaison of soul clinching
Connecting with the already connected
Wrong and right but ultimately wrong
Fast forward
Light years
Oddly we became friends again
Not sustainable though, just because
Lovers have a way of seeing
Joined at the hip, star gazing
The indelible memories linger
Of a hot flame that once was ...
Published 6th May 2015
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Anonymous
6th May 2015 1:01pm
while beautiful, this evokes a keen sense of sadness in me...
... a stunning write
... a stunning write
6th May 2015 1:05pm
Thx EC
It is a sad write, not because of a flame that died, more so because some loves can never be ...
It is a sad write, not because of a flame that died, more so because some loves can never be ...
Anonymous
6th May 2015 1:24pm
while quite lovely, this makes me sadly wistful. very well written, cowboy.
6th May 2015 1:29pm
I know. It has that effect on me too
Some people you can never write enough about, even if they were only with you for a brief time.
Thx M, your comments warm me ...
Some people you can never write enough about, even if they were only with you for a brief time.
Thx M, your comments warm me ...
6th May 2015 2:17pm
6th May 2015 2:32pm
6th May 2015 4:29pm
in my experience, rekindelling is never a good idea - sex is all that's left apart from memories
a sad write and a truism
:-)
a sad write and a truism
:-)
6th May 2015 4:42pm
I am with David on this. I remember a lawyer once saying..if the milk is spoiled, you throw it away. I often wonder if there is such a thing as rekindling love....
6th May 2015 4:56pm
It's tough to rekindle, sometimes you can join at the mind with remembrance of what brought you together. When to much time passes, you have to smile at the good memories and keep on walking ...
6th May 2015 7:47pm
Thank you for sharing, and well i'm all for the sex.. Even if it's not what it once was
it is now what it has become enjoy what you can..!!!
loves you Poe!!!
love Jackie
it is now what it has become enjoy what you can..!!!
loves you Poe!!!
love Jackie
7th May 2015 11:39am
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7th May 2015 11:41am
Thx Ms. Jackson
You get it because you're a Scorpio, just like me. Our needs are different ...
You get it because you're a Scorpio, just like me. Our needs are different ...
