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Simply
The eyes know what the heart does not want to accept
Yet sometimes we become blind to what we see
In the end, the mind will not let love disappear once it has been felt
Yet sometimes we become blind to what we see
In the end, the mind will not let love disappear once it has been felt
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Re: Simply
Anonymous
24th Apr 2015 2:07am
Beautiful, ML.. i love your words.. always so fluid, and packing strength.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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Thank you dear. :) Your thoughts on my words are always welcomed and respected. :)
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24th Apr 2015 1:49pm
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24th Apr 2015 5:07am
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24th Apr 2015 8:10am
Oh hell yea, no truer words on this subject
could I agree with more! Brilliant in it's depth, and delivery... :)
could I agree with more! Brilliant in it's depth, and delivery... :)
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24th Apr 2015 1:50pm
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26th Apr 2015 6:22pm
Love can be the highest ecstasy or the deepest pain, but it's never forgettable. Simply beautiful, Lady.
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27th Apr 2015 2:49am
Aw, thank you CF. Love is...fill in the blank(s). No one explanation is the same. :)
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27th Apr 2015 5:11am
The eyes don't have it and the mind is often tricked by the heart... yet even when we see it, we go back for more! Deep expressions painted in verse... jj
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28th Apr 2015 00:18am
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8th Jun 2015 5:26pm
The mind holds out till the very end. It can't accept the inevitable. Very nice mysteriouslady.
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14th Jun 2015 10:41pm
Why thank you dear. Its nice to see you again and thanks for the love. :)
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Anonymous
15th Jun 2015 4:55am
This is big for me...I get it! and it is beautiful....
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17th Jun 2015 3:30am
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5th Sep 2015 00:54am
Aw, thank you Crim and Im honored you have peaked into my mysterious world...:)
Re. Simply
16th Sep 2015 2:29am
So meaningful for such a brief write. You've said so much in so little words it shows you've drank deep of love's well. Amazing.
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18th Sep 2015 1:28am
Thank you Sandman...at the time of this one, I must have been really thirsty! <3 thanks for stepping into my world.