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I'm not your favorite weather
Sometime I feel like the sky,
nobody notices me
unless there Is some big change.
A rainbow,
the darkness of today's clouds or
a big storm with a flash of lightening.
Yet my head is a constant tornado,
that goes by unnoticed.
nobody notices me
unless there Is some big change.
A rainbow,
the darkness of today's clouds or
a big storm with a flash of lightening.
Yet my head is a constant tornado,
that goes by unnoticed.
Published 21st Apr 2015
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21st Apr 2015 1:00am
Anonymous
21st Apr 2015 8:00am
Understood, beautifuly put.
23rd Apr 2015 4:11am
Simply beautiful, well spoken with an excellent twist at the end. Outstanding work!
--Lissie
--Lissie
3rd Jul 2016 00:43am
Moving in places... Some misspellings & grammar keep it from exuding sincere brilliance. Keep Grindin CAOS737
