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"Be Still My Child"
I sit here before my Lord
with a heavy troubled heart
He sees and feels my tears
not just the ones dripping from my eyes
silently cradles my weeping heart
can feel His luv from sun rays from above
as He looks upon my bewildered soul
whispers words thru the preacher
powerful yet gentle voice that touches me
this is what I heard him say......
"be still my child with all your thoughts
you are misguided by the past
I have brought the soul you luv so dear
saw a need within your two passionate hearts
knew you would share a luv of spirits between you
in a way unknown and not always understood
specially knew what your tender heart needed
he is my healing gift to you in proof I hear your tears
as I also hear his within in his heart
so be still my child I luv so greatly and go in peace
take his hand and forever luv him
walk in the fields of purple flowers
that blow in the cool breeze from my gentle sigh
for he feels your tears that only I can see"
(I literally wrote this in church.....
the lesson was about making choices....
thank you Lord for touching my soul)
with a heavy troubled heart
He sees and feels my tears
not just the ones dripping from my eyes
silently cradles my weeping heart
can feel His luv from sun rays from above
as He looks upon my bewildered soul
whispers words thru the preacher
powerful yet gentle voice that touches me
this is what I heard him say......
"be still my child with all your thoughts
you are misguided by the past
I have brought the soul you luv so dear
saw a need within your two passionate hearts
knew you would share a luv of spirits between you
in a way unknown and not always understood
specially knew what your tender heart needed
he is my healing gift to you in proof I hear your tears
as I also hear his within in his heart
so be still my child I luv so greatly and go in peace
take his hand and forever luv him
walk in the fields of purple flowers
that blow in the cool breeze from my gentle sigh
for he feels your tears that only I can see"
(I literally wrote this in church.....
the lesson was about making choices....
thank you Lord for touching my soul)
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Re: "Bs Still My Child"
Anonymous
19th Apr 2015 10:02pm
Last week the lesson in my church was be "still and truly listen when he speaks to your heart and calls your name."
Beautiful write!
Beautiful write!

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re: Re: "Bs Still My Child"
23rd Apr 2015 3:09am
Hey SG.....isn't that cool...thank you for sharing that with me......He speaks with a whisper but loud enough for us to hear.....glad you liked this piece...always honored to see you stop by.....xo :)
Re: "Bs Still My Child"
19th Apr 2015 10:27pm
he truly does speak to us...it's up to us to listen (lovely words flowergirl)
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re: Re: "Bs Still My Child"
23rd Apr 2015 3:26am
Hey Hash....you're so right about that....thank you for sharing such wise thoughts with me and pleasuring me with your smile xo :)
Re: "Bs Still My Child"
20th Apr 2015 1:26am
Such words spoken can only be heard with a heart of forgiving. A lesson heard, a prayer given. As always beautiful write.
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re: Re: "Bs Still My Child"
23rd Apr 2015 3:31am
Oh AS......you've given me a smile that I needed......I have many things in life to learn.....I seem to always go the hard way.....many tears wrote this.....thank you for sharing such beautiful words....always a thrill to see you......xo :)
Re: "Be Still My Child"
20th Apr 2015 6:34am
Beautiful words from a gifted lady.
Need I say more?
Didn't think so!
XO
:)
Need I say more?
Didn't think so!
XO
:)
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re: Re: "Be Still My Child"
23rd Apr 2015 3:40am
Oh EV you always encourage me......thank you for the luv amd support you always give me.....just a few words is all you need to corrupt me......xo :)
Re: "Be Still My Child"
20th Apr 2015 3:46pm
re: Re: "Be Still My Child"
23rd Apr 2015 3:42am
Hi Atarliss......thank you for stopping by my way......glad you liked this.....appreciate your time amd smile you leave upon my page......xo :)
Re: "Be Still My Child"
20th Apr 2015 5:02pm
re: Re: "Be Still My Child"
23rd Apr 2015 3:44am
Thank you Crow your words mean a lot to me......God is amazing how He luvs thru all our wrongs.......I have a lot of them......always appreciate you very much xo :)
Re: "Be Still My Child"
20th Apr 2015 8:32pm
You have listened to the Holy Spirit. This echoes the experience of so many who have heard words from the Lord in this kind of way.
Agree with Slowgasm and Hashman. It has a resonance found in many of the Psalms.
Agree with Slowgasm and Hashman. It has a resonance found in many of the Psalms.
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re: Re: "Be Still My Child"
23rd Apr 2015 3:48am
Oh SS...I so appreciate your gentle words you leave upon my page......I have experienced this a few times in my life.....I still fine God amazing and luvng when He touches within my soul.....honored by your words......xo :)
Re: "Be Still My Child"
Anonymous
2nd May 2015 1:05pm
A very inspirational piece. My problem is holding on to that feeling and trying to apply the lesson to my life when I'm not in a peaceful state of mind. This is beautiful!

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re: Re: "Be Still My Child"
3rd May 2015 1:49pm
Hi Donovan.....I know what you mean.....lessons given to us are to change us for the better......it's hard to apply to our hearts when we can't feel our way......thank you for your kind words.....xo :)