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Shallow Thinking
I'm thinking of a shallow movement now:
That ripple, as I'm breathing in and out;
The quiver of my flesh, as I kowtow,
Reminding of surrender. I'm about
To concede and commence wilful drowning;
Muscles will liquefy; I lose control -
Which sir will seize, assured he'll be owning
My body and my mind. I know the role:
Sir may ascribe to me intense yearning
To be pressed down upon a bed or floor;
He'll sense my throat is dry and almost burning;
It needs a cock to fill it, (I'm a whore);
Sir will use this prop to stop the sinking:
Face fucks compensate for shallow thinking.
That ripple, as I'm breathing in and out;
The quiver of my flesh, as I kowtow,
Reminding of surrender. I'm about
To concede and commence wilful drowning;
Muscles will liquefy; I lose control -
Which sir will seize, assured he'll be owning
My body and my mind. I know the role:
Sir may ascribe to me intense yearning
To be pressed down upon a bed or floor;
He'll sense my throat is dry and almost burning;
It needs a cock to fill it, (I'm a whore);
Sir will use this prop to stop the sinking:
Face fucks compensate for shallow thinking.
Published 12th Apr 2015
| Edited 2nd Sep 2017
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4th May 2015 1:32am
a very good write SweetOblivion...
think you've captured well the D&s of the situation...
2nd last line....am thinking 'we'll' should actually be 'we' or leave it as 'we'll' and get rid of the 'will'....
'face fucks compensate for shallow thinking...' - very interesting connection.... :)
think you've captured well the D&s of the situation...
2nd last line....am thinking 'we'll' should actually be 'we' or leave it as 'we'll' and get rid of the 'will'....
'face fucks compensate for shallow thinking...' - very interesting connection.... :)
