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The red barn down yonder
His soul sits in ruin,
a weathervane falling,
falling toward the kiss
of a forsythia that grows beside it,
Alive and yellow —
as loud as the galaxy
made immortal by the crush.
a weathervane falling,
falling toward the kiss
of a forsythia that grows beside it,
Alive and yellow —
as loud as the galaxy
made immortal by the crush.
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Anonymous
12th Apr 2015 11:47am
Celestial words!
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Re: The red barn down yonder
12th Apr 2015 7:29pm
when d'roll is called down-yonder, there'll be nothing left to be...& at that , Bless'ed Be
yo short rites have gots good zip, subtle zing, (In the space of, uh, eeter'nity)
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