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Beyond Flesh
In caress of curvature
Draw forth sweet chemicals
Flush with delight
At connection
Unending thrill in closeness
Feel warmth reach horizons
Where fleeting glimpses
Are caught in throaty encouragement
Love's turbulent mixture
Made aggregate
Salted with passion
Spun in drums of heart
Emotion like liquid colours
Bled and Pressed together
On absorbent sheets
From which we make our bed
Draw forth sweet chemicals
Flush with delight
At connection
Unending thrill in closeness
Feel warmth reach horizons
Where fleeting glimpses
Are caught in throaty encouragement
Love's turbulent mixture
Made aggregate
Salted with passion
Spun in drums of heart
Emotion like liquid colours
Bled and Pressed together
On absorbent sheets
From which we make our bed
Published 12th Apr 2015
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Anonymous
12th Apr 2015 3:47am
quite right, beyond flesh.
this is lust and emotion
wrapped in one package
this is lust and emotion
wrapped in one package
12th Apr 2015 9:41am
12th Apr 2015 3:49am
beyond sex. so many stop at orgasm, & never reach the place you describe. sumptuous poetics...
12th Apr 2015 9:49am
Thank you John, I'm still not 100% on all of it, but I am very glad it seems to have conveyed what I was trying to get across.
Sumptuous - love that word! :D
Sumptuous - love that word! :D
Anonymous
12th Apr 2015 3:54am
and can we talk about these two lines?
'Where fleeting glimpses
Are caught in throaty encouragement'
simply stunning. what a spectacular image!
'Where fleeting glimpses
Are caught in throaty encouragement'
simply stunning. what a spectacular image!
12th Apr 2015 4:36am
We can certainly talk about those lines, although I must admit I prefer to experience the subject matter rather than talk about it ;)
Anonymous
12th Apr 2015 4:39am
talk is cheap.
especially when you're feeling right at home.
especially when you're feeling right at home.
12th Apr 2015 9:49am
Anonymous
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12th Apr 2015 10:02am
Thank you Schiitaryn, one must seize inspiration when it strikes. I'm very happy you enjoyed it!
12th Apr 2015 2:10pm
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12th Apr 2015 4:13pm
This seems pretty psychedelic to me Frank, almost brought on a flashback in fact. "Where fleeting glimpses / Are caught in throaty encouragement." Then the "emotion like liquid colors." Feel what I mean? But this is fine work with or without the lysergic influence. A natural high!
14th Apr 2015 10:48pm
I find the best chemicals are endogenous. Not that I have tried many of the exogenous one's in my life, I'm too much of a control freak to temporarily cut my tether with a chemical blade. But I have certainly hung out with people under the influence and so have a empathy with the mind state - which is super fun!
So yes, sexual psychedelia!
So yes, sexual psychedelia!
