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Lines of discontent
The words were meant
to tie two threads together
and create an endless reel
of aspiration
and misty eyed memory
but one is frayed beyond hope
of single minded linearity
and the other is disconnected
to tie two threads together
and create an endless reel
of aspiration
and misty eyed memory
but one is frayed beyond hope
of single minded linearity
and the other is disconnected
Published 11th Apr 2015
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11th Apr 2015 1:40am
Probably could have fleshed it out more, but why?
But I'm too tired to be a perfectionist right now, maybe some other time.
But I'm too tired to be a perfectionist right now, maybe some other time.
11th Apr 2015 5:56am
12th Apr 2015 4:01am
Unfortunately, yes. On the bright side, discontentment is a good muse for me.
13th Apr 2015 8:57am
12th Apr 2015 2:53am
As am I. I'm afraid of being both.
Thank you for your comment, and for your understanding.
Thank you for your comment, and for your understanding.
Anonymous
12th Apr 2015 4:03am
i feel like this isn't finished. or maybe that is the point.
i love those first two lines. i kinda want to steal them. but i wont. :)
i love those first two lines. i kinda want to steal them. but i wont. :)
12th Apr 2015 4:46am
So do I tbh, it was just the way the words fit together in my mind, and anything I added just felt like fluff. I think I'm just not good at writing short pieces just yet.
If you can find a good home for them, you can have them. :)
If you can find a good home for them, you can have them. :)
