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Give
The next step
Will not be taken lightly.
There is a purpose, meaning
To what will happen here.
Understand..
You will never own me,
You will never hold my destiny,
Or steer my ship.
But..
You can use me, lust me
Fuck me.
You must take care
Of this body.
It will hold you
In a grip, so tight
Your body may leave,
But your soul will stay.
These hips will sway
To your rhythm,
Sink onto your lap
Engulfing, every inch of
You.
Tracing your lips,
Feather light brushes,
This mouth will envelope,
Press, suck and drink
You.
These legs will keep strong,
Slow glide up and down,
This body will soak,
Lather and bathe
You.
This will happen.
Only,if you take care,
Know when to give
In return, to
Me.
Will not be taken lightly.
There is a purpose, meaning
To what will happen here.
Understand..
You will never own me,
You will never hold my destiny,
Or steer my ship.
But..
You can use me, lust me
Fuck me.
You must take care
Of this body.
It will hold you
In a grip, so tight
Your body may leave,
But your soul will stay.
These hips will sway
To your rhythm,
Sink onto your lap
Engulfing, every inch of
You.
Tracing your lips,
Feather light brushes,
This mouth will envelope,
Press, suck and drink
You.
These legs will keep strong,
Slow glide up and down,
This body will soak,
Lather and bathe
You.
This will happen.
Only,if you take care,
Know when to give
In return, to
Me.
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Re: Give
Anonymous
4th Apr 2015 6:38am
So sexy, so good!
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Re: Give
4th Apr 2015 11:08am
Very sexy! Nice look at the give and take of the lover's dance. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
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Re: Give
4th Apr 2015 12:02pm
Song and passionate, but with an agenda of rules for the loving.
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Re: Give
4th Apr 2015 5:04pm
Yes, it goes both ways. You're more than generous with your heart, body and soul and hope for some reciprocity. I hope you're given the attention you deserve in your love life. You're already gifted as a poet.
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re: Re: Give
9th Apr 2015 3:14am
That is so kind of you to say, Crowfly. I think we're always doubting our own abilities to reach others with our 'art'. Thank you!
Re: Give
8th Apr 2015 10:47pm
I quite like the structure of this poem looloo, it has a great flow and reads really well.
As for the subject matter - you put forward this delicious invitation of wanton physical fun and indulgence, but layer what is on offer with the strict boundaries of what it is you need in return for such gifts - which seems more emotional and caring than physical.
Great poem looloo
As for the subject matter - you put forward this delicious invitation of wanton physical fun and indulgence, but layer what is on offer with the strict boundaries of what it is you need in return for such gifts - which seems more emotional and caring than physical.
Great poem looloo
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re: Re: Give
9th Apr 2015 3:12am
Thank you for that great review Franco. Women are innately emotional and caring. Pleasure can be given, but it must be received to feed our hearts. Even if we aren't in love. That's my thought.
Re: Give
Anonymous
8th Apr 2015 10:54pm
oh this is very well done.
and i get it. one hundred percent!
and i get it. one hundred percent!

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re: Re: Give
9th Apr 2015 3:09am
I have missed you. No really, you have no idea.
Thank you for adding this to your RL. It means the world.
Thank you for adding this to your RL. It means the world.
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Anonymous
9th Apr 2015 3:11am
awwwww! thanks, lady! same lady, different profile. :)

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Re: Give
9th Apr 2015 1:23am
pleasure given for pleasure received. communication is the key to bliss...
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re: Re: Give
9th Apr 2015 7:19am
Speak and I will listen..or at least give it an A+ try. Yes, it's all about communication.
Re: Give
12th Apr 2015 7:36am
"Your body may leave,
But your soul will stay."
Favourite lines in a great piece!
Thanks for sharing!
But your soul will stay."
Favourite lines in a great piece!
Thanks for sharing!
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Re. Give
11th Aug 2016 1:29pm
Visceral, charged write. The 1st person voice lends a personal intensity. Enjoyed it.
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